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Mar 28, 2011 12:12 |  #1

I'm new to black and white conversions. How are these? I know they both have different moods, but the high contrast seemed less suitable to the first one.

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Mar 28, 2011 12:21 |  #2

Last one is my favorite. Very well done. But I'm no pro though.lol




  
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Mar 28, 2011 12:25 |  #3

I'm wondering if the left side of her face could be brought up a hair in the second. Just to bring a little bit more detail out. Great photos though, and an adorable subject!


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Mar 28, 2011 13:57 as a reply to  @ BobRob12's post |  #4

What a little sweetie!

It's hard to judge the conversion without seeing the color image. I especially like #1. I think I would
re-compose it so there's more empty space to camera-left .. and maybe experiment with the lighting to
bring more attention to her face.

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Mar 28, 2011 15:38 |  #5

peano, your composition is much much stronger! Thank you :) That one was shot in natural light indoors. I'll try to export the color version for you so that you can see what I was working with.


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Mar 28, 2011 20:40 |  #6

#2 is super adorable!


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Mar 28, 2011 20:49 |  #7

pixidance wrote in post #12109423 (external link)
I'm new to black and white conversions. How are these? I know they both have different moods, but the high contrast seemed less suitable to the first one.

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Great job! I like them all. What body, lens you using?


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Mar 28, 2011 21:12 as a reply to  @ adamg5's post |  #8

On this one, I would open the shadow details on her face and darken some of the background distractions. Another great capture!

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Mar 28, 2011 21:26 |  #9

2nd pic is better with the background burned abit like peano did but the dodging on the face is a little too much..Maybe dont over do the dodging on the shadow on the face


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Mar 29, 2011 08:10 |  #10

very cute. I think the first one, would look better if the background was completely white, not just an off white/grayish.


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Mar 29, 2011 18:34 |  #11

Thanks again for all your input. I'm still pretty new to photography. I've had my Canon T1i for about a year. These pictures were taken with the T1i and my 50mm f/1.4


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Mar 29, 2011 19:24 |  #12

Here are the color versions

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STTcolor (2) (external link) by pixidance (external link), on Flickr

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STTcolor (external link) by pixidance (external link), on Flickr

and here's the modified bw
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STTcolor (1) (external link) by pixidance (external link), on Flickr

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Mar 29, 2011 19:27 |  #13

don't change a thing on #1. Looks like a GREAT B&W from the early-mid 1960s. Trust me ... we have hundreds of these shots of me and my siblings!

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