First attempt at fashion photography

I tagged a long with a fellow shooter just to dabble my toes in the fashion photography world and this is what I got I would love to get as much feedback as possible to help me raise the bar for the next shoot thanks in advance.

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I just love, love, love your stuff!
These are great, though looks like the model needs a little sleep or something. His eyes look a bit puffy.

Yea thats very possible we shot at 7am lol.

love the first shot!
I would try some different comps so you dont have all shot where the subject is centered
otherwise they are good

If it's fashion photography you're after then there should be at least some emphasis on the fashion..

In each photo, does there seem to be an emphasis on the fashion? Or the model? If you were the designer of the clothes, how would you feel about how your work is display? A few of the photos would work as part of an editorial spread, but they need to be accompanied by clear images of the product.

The 2nd one is the best

Number 3 - why not a portrait orientation? Also... his suit is slightly too big and is very noticably open/sloppy looking in that shot. Your exposure and PP is good though, just the nitpicks that are very important in fashion.

Thanks for the input but could someone please explain to me what the difference between editorial and fashion is sorry it might be a newb question but I would like to know thanks.

fashion is directed more toward showing off the garments, and the details of it.
editorial is directed more toward the look of the model, in an artistic way.

Thanks Autonomous after hearing that I think I am more of an editorial photographer.

Nice shots man, just would like to see his expression change just a tad between shots.

Yes he needs sleep,like the clarity in them and his expression never changes looks like he is after his ex wife he looks really mad.

great shots!

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Yes he needs sleep,like the clarity in them and his expression never changes looks like he is after his ex wife he looks really mad.

LMFAO, HAHA. I'm sorry but LMFAO.


p.s. has the guy ever modeled before?

According to him he said he does a lot but I have shot seniors with way more interaction with the camera funny thing being they have never had photos taken before so I don't know. I just went a long with a shoot because a friend had asked if I wanted to come along and since I have not shot in such a long time I was eager to go. Yea all and all the dude was very lame with expressions I guess he thought it was dumb or childish to smile once in awhile who knows...... lol.