at the coffeeshop - C&C plz!

i was trying to make the scene look a bit warmer, so the white balance is probably off. i don't know if it was a good idea :-/
Thanks!

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The first three seem a little out of focus to me, but the last one doesn't. I do like the set up of the second one though.

#1 - I would try and adjust the WB here, try and make the whites white.
#2 - I like this shot, but it seems a bit underexposed.
#3 - nothing in focus.
#4 - I find this interesting, but wish there was more to see at the bottom.

thanks for the comments!!
it's amazing how differently i get to see my own pictures once i see others' comments.
thanks again!

1, I like the idea, but it is oof quite a bit. The white balance is warm, and I would adjust it a smidge (technical term).
2 has creative composition, but it is underexposed and too shallow DOF. I don't actually see what is in focus on that one. I would adjust the white balance on this one as well.
3 doesn't seem to be in focus at all, wb is still off and doesn't have a clear subject. It looks like shutter speed was rather low.
4 has creative composition, but doesn't have a clear subject. I am puzzled by this one.
A few things to keep an eye on, but keep shooting. It's the best way to get practice!

Thank you for your advice! I'll keep working on it

The most interesting thing in these photos is the man with a tripod against the wall.