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First Maternity Shoot

 
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Mar 31, 2011 16:50 |  #1

Shot with Caon EOS Digital Rebel XS
ISO 400
Focal Length 39mm
EXIF Version 0221


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Mar 31, 2011 17:04 |  #2

In my opinion, the compositions are good, but I'd tone back the HDR effect, particularly in the 1st shot. It's making her belly, and even arms too "textured," when I prefer to see them smoother. I might want to crop the bottom portion of her jean shorts out, to make them look cleaner and more classic instead of showing a bunch of ripped pieces of cloth hanging down.

The 2nd appears to be losing a lot of image quality, unless it was a very severe crop, I assume because of post-processing. Also, how did it look rotated counterclockwise? Her legs appear as the dominant feature, and them being rotated gives me the impression it's the wrong orientation. Maybe a vignette around the image would bring the attention to her shadow.


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Mar 31, 2011 17:18 as a reply to  @ ASmith's post |  #3

Thank you! I will do that and I really appreciate the input. I am working on learning more every day about photography and how to make mine better.


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