Angela - Fashion Set 1

This is from my shoot yesterday. let me know what you think
ask me anything beside toning, that is too much details

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I love all these, the toning is superb and lighting aswell. I don't like her right knee being chopped off in the first shot though.

Are there some color balance and focus issues or are these intended effects? Your interesting perspective choices lead me to suspect the latter.

pretty awesome! love the whole set

So uhh...how bout that toning? (Sorry had to lol...jk btw)

But yeah, thhese photos are excellent...I don't like the composition of #3 though =[...the pp on all of them are superb however

It's certainly a... unique... set.

My favorite is #3. I don't find the composition distracting at all. I see where everyone is coming from, but because the bottom left portion of the frame is much darker than the rest, it is not so distracting. If you did recompose it so that her knee wasn't "chopped off," I'm afraid it would draw the viewer's eye away from the subject. Good job

like the set ..good work

Salma wrote in post #12149912
I love all these, the toning is superb and lighting aswell. I don't like her right knee being chopped off in the first shot though.

thanks for the critique <3 but its just a small little crop i can live with ;]

AZGeorge wrote in post #12150256
Are there some color balance and focus issues or are these intended effects? Your interesting perspective choices lead me to suspect the latter.

intended of course hahaha ;]

paradiddleluke wrote in post #12150607
pretty awesome! love the whole set

shanks!! <3

its my post processing for fashion/editorial look

Growingshort wrote in post #12150737
So uhh...how bout that toning? (Sorry had to lol...jk btw)

But yeah, thhese photos are excellent...I don't like the composition of #3 though =[...the pp on all of them are superb however

yeah i wish its wider. thanks you for the critique

thank you!! hahha everyone have a different perspective of the photo ;]

thank you so much!!

#6 is my favorite of the set. you'd probably want to photoshop her tummy area though.