Telma

I wanted to post these in glamor but the forum didnt let me.what do u guys think?

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Did you put the newspaper up for the shoot or is that how that wall is normally? #1 seems a bit OOF or missed her eye and landed on her hair

#1 is not too bad if the focus was right. I like the pose and the look she's giving.

#2 not too fond of the light being centered on the head and upper torso then falling off towards the extremities. That may have been what you were going for though.

I put up the papers for the shoot.
the first shot is actually sharp,idk why it looks oof on here.
I need to pay more attention on the hair light.I always have a problem with it.
for the 2nd one i was going for that look but I guess It didnt work out to well

I like the second one. It's sexy!