Here are a couple shots of a friend of mine that i did for a photography class assignment. let me know what you think!
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Apr 05, 2011 14:34 | #1 Here are a couple shots of a friend of mine that i did for a photography class assignment. let me know what you think! -Jayson- my flickr
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Apr 05, 2011 20:37 | #2 #1 would be better if you'd gotten the top of her head or pulled in closer with a portrait vice landscape photo. Nice subject.
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cwtreloar Member 39 posts Joined Sep 2008 More info | Apr 05, 2011 21:36 | #3 I like the composition of the first, and the color balance and exposure of the second. Put the two together and I think it'll be a force to be reckoned with! http://www.flickr.com/photos/cwtreloar/
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Apr 06, 2011 00:10 | #4 hmm, thanks for that...  -Jayson- my flickr
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Apr 06, 2011 00:18 | #5 Dano_nav wrote in post #12166161 #1 would be better if you'd gotten the top of her head or pulled in closer with a portrait vice landscape photo. Nice subject. i actually did get the top of her head, that is a crop from a larger photo. it was originally in vertical orientation, but i didnt like it near as much. I like the composition of the first, and the color balance and exposure of the second. Put the two together and I think it'll be a force to be reckoned with! i'm trying to re-edit the first one to look more like the 2nd, if i succeed, i'll post it up.  -Jayson- my flickr
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suecassidy Goldmember  4,102 posts Likes: 37 Joined May 2007 Location: Huntington Beach California More info | Apr 06, 2011 09:37 | #6 I would clone out the ?? mascara?? in the corner of her dominant eye, but otherwise I really like the first shot. I would like to have seen a bit more of her hair on that one side, but what is there is great, as it has movement in it. I liked the square crop, it didn't bother me that the top of her head was cropped. That is often a matter of personal taste, despite the "rules", which are made to be broken situationally. Sue Cassidy
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Apr 06, 2011 13:19 | #7 suecassidy wrote in post #12169197 I would clone out the ?? mascara?? in the corner of her dominant eye, but otherwise I really like the first shot. I would like to have seen a bit more of her hair on that one side, but what is there is great, as it has movement in it. I liked the square crop, it didn't bother me that the top of her head was cropped. That is often a matter of personal taste, despite the "rules", which are made to be broken situationally. wow i didnt even notice the mascara, thanks for bringing that to my attention. after looking at the first one, I would prefer to crop out more of her neck/shirt if i was cutting her hair that much, just to balance it out. -Jayson- my flickr
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