besides the fact it's dead center, what else needs improving with my UN
shots? I'd be happy with 3out10 
maybe a bit out of focus too????
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ONE30 I don't have a point!!!  4,284 posts Likes: 1560 Joined Mar 2011 Location: newYORK More info | Apr 06, 2011 21:12 | #1 besides the fact it's dead center, what else needs improving with my UN
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calamari86 Member 69 posts Joined Mar 2011 More info | Apr 06, 2011 22:07 | #2 I would say try to clean up the clutter of the background (of the flower) to get the viewer to pay more attention to the main flower at hand. Either by contrasting colors, use of shallow dof, whatever. Im also unsure about it's composition, as it sits right in the center, or perhaps its the cluttered background thats giving me this tension of wanting to see the flower and the flower itself. My Flickr!!
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hillavoider Member 99 posts Joined Mar 2011 More info | Apr 07, 2011 01:55 | #3 more Bokeh
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Jericobot Cream of the Crop  5,128 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jun 2010 Location: preppingforthetrumpets More info | Apr 07, 2011 03:35 | #4 Wider aperture to blur out the background α7ii + (batis 25 f2 / zeiss 55 f1,8 / macro 90 f2,8)
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Hutchdesigns Member  165 posts Joined Jan 2011 Location: Middle Tennessee More info | Apr 07, 2011 07:43 | #5 Jericobot wrote in post #12174815  Wider aperture to blur out the background Amen. Way too much going on in the background. Canon 60D/20D and a few lenses.
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin  44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | Its not the BG that gets me, its too much blur in the foreground.Isolate the main bloom, and then use your DOF to soften the extras. you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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ONE30 THREAD STARTER I don't have a point!!! 4,284 posts Likes: 1560 Joined Mar 2011 Location: newYORK More info | thanks everyone, i wrote everything down on my notepad and I'll take it out with me next time I go out! It's finally warming up in ny!
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