Apr 08, 2011 01:42 | #1 I would like some feedback please. Thanks.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. Nikon D810 Nikon 50F/1.4G - Nikon 70-200F/2.8II
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin  44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | Apr 08, 2011 08:53 | #2 First one, they seem pissed off..and I think its because you have them facing the sun, thus the squints? you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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Apr 08, 2011 12:30 | #3 Flo wrote in post #12182674  First one, they seem pissed off..and I think its because you have them facing the sun, thus the squints? Second, WB is off.I know the inside lights are going to throw you, but its really orangey/green. Actually, the sun was almost straight up and left with an overcast sky. No shadow on the ground. Nikon D810 Nikon 50F/1.4G - Nikon 70-200F/2.8II
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Apr 08, 2011 12:48 | #4 In #1 they don't look very happy, in #2 you might want to clone out the green lights in the elevator. Good job hiding in front of the subjects as I don't see you in the mirror image
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Apr 08, 2011 15:09 | #5 Avarus wrote in post #12183932 In #1 they don't look very happy, in #2 you might want to clone out the green lights in the elevator. Good job hiding in front of the subjects as I don't see you in the mirror image Yeah, they were mugging in this shot and the look was on purpose Nikon D810 Nikon 50F/1.4G - Nikon 70-200F/2.8II
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Crocodile101 Member  186 posts Joined May 2009 Location: Westchester, IL More info | Apr 08, 2011 21:09 | #6  Permanent banI would like #2 if the bride 1. dropped the bouquet a little and had her turn her head to camera right a little. 2. not show the elevator door (not a good place to shoot 4 people). You don't take a photograph, you make it. Ansel Adams.
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Mr.Kenmuir Senior Member  316 posts Joined Feb 2011 Location: Vancouver B.C. More info | Apr 09, 2011 00:14 | #7 all I can say since I have never done a wedding before is for the first photograph maybe crop it so its only the groom and bride as the guests look grumpy. Maybe you got them at a bad time but I would crop it from the belly up and cut out the rest. 2nd photograph looks good it's to bad if you didn't just have the bride standing there with her flowers, great work as a second shooter I bet the experience was a blast. Vancouver B.C. Family Based Photographer | Flickr
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ni$mo350 Cream of the Crop  6,011 posts Likes: 14 Joined Apr 2009 Location: Portland, OR More info | Apr 09, 2011 00:17 | #8 |
Flo Gimmie Some Lovin 44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | drdiesel1 wrote in post #12183822 Actually, the sun was almost straight up and left with an overcast sky. No shadow on the ground. The color cast is from the inside of the elevator being clad in bronze, brass and dark woods with a single florescent light. Well, they still look pissed off.lol... you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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rjc1 Senior Member  553 posts Joined Jul 2008 Location: Ohio More info | Apr 09, 2011 12:08 | #10 dr, I like them alot, good job. I don't see an objectionable color cast in the second. I think it looks quite natural. The first looks like it was planned and gets the attitude across for the shot. You should feel good about these pics. 40D with 28-135 IS , Tamron 17-50 ,100-400 f4.5-5.6L, 100mm f2.8L macro IS, 430EX, 430EXll,MiniTT1/FlexTT5 , Kata R-103,
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Apr 09, 2011 12:15 | #11 rjc1 wrote in post #12189558 dr, I like them alot, good job. I don't see an objectionable color cast in the second. I think it looks quite natural. The first looks like it was planned and gets the attitude across for the shot. You should feel good about these pics. Thank You Nikon D810 Nikon 50F/1.4G - Nikon 70-200F/2.8II
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Apr 09, 2011 12:15 | #12 Flo wrote in post #12189345 Well, they still look pissed off.lol...
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BigApplePhotography Wish I had a 5D Classic  4,148 posts Likes: 1 Joined Feb 2011 Location: Near a pot of gold More info | Apr 09, 2011 14:50 | #13 In #1 the bride`s face looks very soft to me Love POTN? Donate!
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