Pics from last weekend in Beverly Hills

Did a workshop/group shoot in Beverly Hills last weekend at an awesome location. Here are some of the pics that don't belong in the G&N forum.

Model: Jessica Taylor
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C&C is welcomed on these... what do you think?

282 Views and no C&C?

not bad, 4 and 5 could use some skin processing, lovely model in the first 3, love the first one, i'm a sucker for ferrari's... and girls.... and its got both soooooo can't complain!

avimagery wrote in post #12197503
C&C is welcomed on these... what do you think?

You'll get a lot of lookers that forget how words work when you combine pretty girls and exotic cars

I think they're strong images, but there things I'd do a little differently/watch out for.
On the first image, I don't think you probably had the option to drive the Ferrari to a different location, but the garage detracts a little I think. I like the low angle, but I might've tried shooting from the left side of the car back toward the right if there's more space.
Love the Bentley, but I think I'd try to avoid the flare on the bottom right personally. I see you were using some flash in the other images, and I don't know if it would've been enough to knock down the ambient a few stops, but the highlighted out windscreen is a little distracting (though lighting a car is a whole 'nother issue). Could you have taken photos of them inside the car/stepping out?
Like the third, but the reflector on her face is a little hot for my taste, IMO.
The framing on the last two are really nice, and you got a good connection with her. I think bringing the light off-camera a little more if you could've would've helped.

Good work, these are only things I would've done differently, but strong images and nice work!

Huge fan of #1 and #3, I agree that the reflector is a little strong in her face in #3, but you could probably tone that down with a little post.

Numbers 4 and 5 look like they need some processing, and 4 seems a little OOF to me (could just be my new glasses... LOL).

Thanks for the feedback guys. The shoot was a lot of fun; lots of models and some great shots. The location was a nice house in the Hills, and i had free range of the grounds, but unfortunately I wasn't able to move the cars to a more desirable location, so I had to work with what I had. I'm still learning the capabilities of my 60D; I actually got it 3 days before the shoot, so it was my first trial with it. For the most part I'm pleased with the results, but I agree, I could do better. Thanks again.

avimagery wrote in post #12224720
Thanks for the feedback guys. The shoot was a lot of fun; lots of models and some great shots. The location was a nice house in the Hills, and i had free range of the grounds, but unfortunately I wasn't able to move the cars to a more desirable location, so I had to work with what I had. I'm still learning the capabilities of my 60D; I actually got it 3 days before the shoot, so it was my first trial with it. For the most part I'm pleased with the results, but I agree, I could do better. Thanks again.

I think you did fine man. I'd say biggest thing to work on is gettin' those KEYS

what kind of lens did you use in the first picture?

what kind of lens did you use on the first picture?

first 3 good last 2 [4 and 5] need work....they look flashy and frankly amateur...

rawlyphik wrote in post #12225664
what kind of lens did you use on the first picture?

Canon EF-S 15-85.