A day in the park with Destiny- 04/11/2011 Oakey Park LV NV

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Jon

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Too many pictures but I'll let it slide because she's pretty. She looks like Elisha Cuthbert.

I'll get this party started...

#1 I like it...but...A little blown out (you may hear this a lot from me here). Wish it wasn't so centered. Almost could be a nice portrait layout. Was it cold? Why is she crossing her arms? Her shoulders look scrunched up also. The face is exquisite!

#2 Not digging the hand on the face. A little blown out.

#3 I wish she was looking at the camera. Don't like her hand clasped. She's not so blown out as the background is and its distracting.

#4 Don't like her foot cut off by the bridge. The background distracts. She starts to blend into the BG and the bridge is so powerful that it takes away from her.

#5 Man if she had just swung those eye exactly as they are towards the camera!!! I would crop off some of the left side too. She's positioned so far right that you don't need all that space. Again, blown out, but could work here because background is not blown out...a little busy, but not blown and give separation.

#6 One of my favs. Think it needs to be straightened a bit. I know the bridge may be curved, but it just looks funny. Wish you had some fill in for the shadows on her face.

#7 Very nice idea here. The rotation works. The colors seem off and she is blown out again. That tree in front of her distracts my eye also. Could turn this into a portrait also, cropped up closer to her back, then pull the crop over from the left side.

#8 This is a very cool shot to me. I wish the sky was maybe a bit darker so it would give her more separation from it. Love the flair!

#9 Not digging the hunched shoulders too much. Compared to #8 (same shot position) the colors are inconstant with each other.

#10 NOW the sky is darker! I want to say straighten it, she's too bright, etc... But NO, I absolutely LOVE this shot as it's composed. Maybe tweak the brightness and colors a bit. LOVELY!!!!

#11 Shoot me now...I'm ready Lord!!! Her had might look awkward, the shadow on her left arm might be wierd, BUT LAWDY LAWD this pic looks goooood!!! Nice work!

#12 Not liking the crop. If the whole body was in there it would be a great shot. Not if I like the coloring for this.

#13 I'm kind of OK with the crop here. Not sure if I like the coloring though. What I really don't like is her looking out of the picture so close to the edge. I does have a mood to it. I would for sure, at the very least, crop out the bright part on the far left.

#14 If her hand wasn't cut off i'd love this picture A LOT!!! Might rotate a hair CCW. I don't know if you can, but if you could shift the whole image to the left pushing her right shoulder to the left side and bringing her hand into the picture it would rock so much. I'm not sure about the coloring effect here either. Not too bad in this shot I guess.

#15 This shot does nothing for me. The shadows are crazy, her arm pit is in my face, she's partly hidden behind the tree, and partly out of the shot. Pretty smile though!

#16 ON THE OTHER HAND...this one I love!!! I like the B&W...maybe with a little more contrast. Would love to see the color of this also!.

VERY lovely model...very nice shots...you should feel lucky!
My wife won't let me shoot anyone she thinks is prettier than her...NOT THAT I'M SAYING YOU MODEL IS...noooooo!!! My wife is the prettiest in the world *whew*!@!!

i would crop out more of the grass on the last picture.