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Apr 13, 2011 08:54 |  #1

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Apr 13, 2011 09:17 |  #2

Lighting a comp are pretty good. Even though #1 is centered I like the pipes thing...not too distracting I don't think.
#2 could be set off center a bit I think. Pose is nice.

My real problem is with the choice of top(s) for this model. No offense, but it makes her look pregnant, the way that shaw thing opens up and wraps around her mid section. If the under garment wasn't so noisy (maybe black) it could work, but the way it is it's hideous. No offense to anyone :)


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Apr 13, 2011 09:48 |  #3

The light looks quite harsh in these, especially in the second picture. It gives the impression a bare flash was used without any modifier.

#1:
-Light from the flash has burned out her right thigh.
-The perspective looks odd. It appears as if the subject has very large hands. This is not a feminine pose.
-Harsh shadow bleed to the subject's left (camera right).




  
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Apr 13, 2011 10:54 |  #4

Kechar wrote in post #12213122 (external link)
Lighting a comp are pretty good. Even though #1 is centered I like the pipes thing...not too distracting I don't think.
#2 could be set off center a bit I think. Pose is nice.

My real problem is with the choice of top(s) for this model. No offense, but it makes her look pregnant, the way that shaw thing opens up and wraps around her mid section. If the under garment wasn't so noisy (maybe black) it could work, but the way it is it's hideous. No offense to anyone :)

Thanks for the honesty. That helps the most. I agree about the top. I think it's how I posed the model. I'm still working on posing, and she's only 13 years old(daughter).

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Mike


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Apr 13, 2011 10:56 |  #5

IrishK wrote in post #12213340 (external link)
The light looks quite harsh in these, especially in the second picture. It gives the impression a bare flash was used without any modifier.

#1:
-Light from the flash has burned out her right thigh.
-The perspective looks odd. It appears as if the subject has very large hands. This is not a feminine pose.
-Harsh shadow bleed to the subject's left (camera right).

Yeah, light was a bit harsh. I'm working on 1 and 2 light setups, and it was pitch black during this shoot. Didn't have a reflector, and these are shoots for me to get used to my new 5d, as I have been shooting with a 7d for the last year or so.

Posing is one of my most intimidating factors.

Thanks,

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