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Vacation Critique

 
natums
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Apr 15, 2011 04:42 |  #1

Well I discovered I can't take traditional vacation photos, most my photos were of bug, lizards, surfers, sunsets, and flowers. I am looking for some basic C&C, I feel like I had a successful trip photography-wise but I know there are always ways to improve.

This is kind of a best-of-trip sampler.

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Ride the break (external link) by IAmNatums (external link), on Flickr

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Apr 15, 2011 08:40 |  #2

#2 in my opinion could use some more DOF, I really like #6, and I cant see the last two photos, but the others are all very good, were these all taken in Maui?




  
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Apr 15, 2011 09:54 |  #3

1: I like but I think it needs a little more umph. The fine details need to be more apparent.
2: Needs to be a little closer and a little more in focus. There is a lot of frame here with bg only in it.
3: I would like more if that darn fence wasn't there. I would clone out that arch in upper L corner. The shadows go all the way black, which isn't bad, but it takes away from the clouds and light
4: See my suggestions for 2 and 1
5: Get rid of the stray head behind the wave.
6: Im just not sure about this one. I get what you were going for, but it's just not overly exciting for me.
Nice job. Im jealous of your holiday! Keep Shooting


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Apr 15, 2011 19:32 |  #4

Thanks for the critique guys! Will take it in mind.


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