my girlfriend.. c&c pls!!

Please let me know what you think!

I'd crop a bit on the bottom and use more natural color balance, I know you probably did PP intentional but just my $0.02. One other thing, it's always best to crop with the lens, as in stepping forward =) great model though!

i agree with the above, although the color balance is your choice and vision.

beautiful gf...

Your girlfriend is gorgeous, first off. I hope she likes being photographed, because she makes a beautiful model. It's a good shot, but I think it clashes a little, because she's dressed for glamour, but the environment doesn't really with it, just my taste, some people like pushing the lady on the street shots, but generally the pose is a little more provocative possibly. I agree with the others on the WB, and I'd probably not center her in the frame, but move her off to one side.
Good luck man, you've got the advantage of already have a relationship with your model, make the most of it and you can definitely do some spectacular things.

The bottom needs a little cropping. Apart from that, this is a beautiful picture. Your girlfriend is very gorgeous, she could make it as a model.

G'day Leo, Lovely lady and I don't mind the colour at all. She seems to be floating, I am assuming that you have added the background?

Regards, Dutch