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Apr 16, 2011 10:32 |  #1
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one of my first studio shoots so still have lots to learn.

let me know what you guys think. bring on the harshest of criticisms (constructive if possible haha)...im here to learn.

YN460 in rear for rim, large 4x6 softbox camera right via AB80, gridded stripbox model right via PCB white lightning.

LR3 PP sharpening, brushing

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Apr 16, 2011 10:57 |  #2

Overall a very nice picture, nice pose, pretty girl, exposue is good. Only critique I have is focus on the face/eyes is a little soft. Looks like the focus was sharper on the sweater.


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Apr 16, 2011 11:08 |  #3

Odd blotchiness/ streaks on forehead. Due to the brushing?




  
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Apr 16, 2011 11:13 |  #4
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50 1.8 so pics are sharp and focused on girl

OOF must be due to wat Tup said. Are u saying u think i brushed too much? u mean her left forehead? does look a lil weird.. thanks

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