Chloe + Chris eShoot

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i love number 4!

#4.. Whoa! Great set

those are all quite amazing! #4 rules

All are great but I love the emotion in 2.

Thanks all!

Another #4 fave vote! But all great!

I think it's a great set and my fave is the last one but I have to say the sun on his pants in the first one has kind of a spotlight effect lol.

^---^ lol yea I noticed that, we had a diffusion scrim on their faces but a little sun sneaked in .... need a bigger scrim I suppose.

These are awesome buddy. Great job.

beautiful scenery!

I disagree with all the above critiques and will actually try to help you.

1 Aurora note the problem, among others.
2 He's out of focus, and there are no catchlights in her eye. A flash would have been useful
3 What's the point of this shot? Nothing is happening, and your horizon is off too.
4 Horizon in this shot and the silo is the focal point. It'ss the biggest thing in the shot!
5 i like the second shot best but he dress is blown out in both of them.

6 Slightly washed out, actually the sky is blah...............

7 Against a totally dead sky we have what? Some sort of "artistic" flare...............??

I'm really at a loss as to why praise is readily heaped on this segment of the forum on what are clearly inferior photos. Not just this set, but almost all of them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sorry I cannot agree with the people above.

mrmarklin wrote in post #12240419
I disagree with all the above critiques and will actually try to help you.

1 Aurora note the problem, among others.
2 He's out of focus, and there are no catchlights in her eye. A flash would have been useful
3 What's the point of this shot? Nothing is happening, and your horizon is off too.
4 Horizon in this shot and the silo is the focal point. It'ss the biggest thing in the shot!
5 i like the second shot best but he dress is blown out in both of them.

6 Slightly washed out, actually the sky is blah...............

7 Against a totally dead sky we have what? Some sort of "artistic" flare...............??

I'm really at a loss as to why praise is readily heaped on this segment of the forum on what are clearly inferior photos. Not just this set, but almost all of them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sorry I cannot agree with the people above.

Seriously?

I love #2, that look is priceless.

wizard2340 wrote in post #12266496
Seriously?

Seriously what? I think this is a good, honest critique.

Although it may hurt to hear these kinds of critiques, a lot can be learned from it and it can really improve your skills if these things are watched for next time.

Look again at number 4. At first glance, it looks nice. It's colorful and fun. Now pay attention to where your eyes go. Mine bounce back from the silo to the couple, and then even the trees. Too much competition. The horizon is dead center in the frame. It certainly had potential to be a killer shot.

Scott