Joan+Ryan ~ my 2nd engagement photoshoot

This is actually my 2nd engagement photoshoot, all types of CC are welcome and really needed for future improvement. Thank you very much in advance!!

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I like most of them, my favourite would be #9 as cheesy as it is lol but something rubs me the wrong way - inconsistent cropping and processing maybe. I'm usually ok with heads cut off but not in the way you did it in #1 and #11.

Svetlana ~ thanks for the feedback. about #9...haha, yes it is a bit cheesy. But the couple requested, I can't say no...lol

about the inconsistent processing. It is because I'm still in a process of finding my own style and trying out different things. (much practice needed...)

thanks again
alan

Finding your own style is hard...What helps me is I want to think of my photos as timeless so I started to try and steer away from cross-processed and washed out looks, because I doubt it will be popular in a few years. Now and then I go back to that but mostly I go for clean look. Whatever style you pick - stick to it. Try and process the images in the same way - you will see a huge difference in your work. Good luck and keep playing!

I really like the shot thru the window
nice job

Svetlana wrote in post #12267877
I like most of them, my favourite would be #9 as cheesy as it is lol but something rubs me the wrong way - inconsistent cropping and processing maybe. I'm usually ok with heads cut off but not in the way you did it in #1 and #11.

Great comments Svetlana. I agree with what you are saying about the heads cut off.

very good job! I like the PP. although I agree with Svetlana, your PP is kinda whats in Today. Im sure the couple is very happy with the results!

Svetlana wrote in post #12268277
Finding your own style is hard...What helps me is I want to think of my photos as timeless so I started to try and steer away from cross-processed and washed out looks, because I doubt it will be popular in a few years. Now and then I go back to that but mostly I go for clean look. Whatever style you pick - stick to it. Try and process the images in the same way - you will see a huge difference in your work. Good luck and keep playing!

agree, it hard to really find what you are looking for. Hope I will find it soon or someday, will take the words and keep working on it. thanks

Accessoire wrote in post #12268540
I really like the shot thru the window
nice job

thanks...I wish I have my polarizer filter with me, it will probably turn out better at the end

jcu809 wrote in post #12268594
Great comments Svetlana. I agree with what you are saying about the heads cut off.

I was trying to have himself or herself to stand out a bit more, but I guess that doesn't work that well. haha...

alan

tony rage wrote in post #12268622
very good job! I like the PP. although I agree with Svetlana, your PP is kinda whats in Today. Im sure the couple is very happy with the results!

yeah, I did tried couple one with split-tone. kind of hard on control the amount of tone and ratio. And yes they do like them, but I know I can do better...more practice.

alan

good stuff! and ups for bay area represent!

Awesome pictures! SF!

I don't get the idea of cutting the head on 11, other than that it is great job.

Its a great set, I like it

i like the colour. good job and beautiful girl