rach

I like the girl and the way she is posing, it does envoke a feeling of dance.

The processing is kind of funky though. Her hands look like she has been digging in the dirt. It is almost the color of henna so I am wondering if that may be the issue and that is not clear.

The wooden floor looks like it was shopped in. The way the boards run are not consistanc to the way the concrete seems to be running. Compounding that is the odd blur around her feet and lower legs where they meet the wood floor.

Your horizon is not level. And while this is is sometimes used well artistically, it just isn't here.

This is just what I saw - I hope that this helps you out.

oh ok cool