MikeCondax Member 206 posts Likes: 5 Joined Oct 2009 More info | Apr 26, 2011 19:13 | #1 So I did this shoot for a friend. I am looking for honest feedback. Since posting her shots on my Facebook page last night I have received a few requests to shoot some of her friends. Thanks in Advance!!!  2)  3)  4)  5)  6)  the rest can be seen here.... http://consciouseye.smugmug.com …WWNx3X#1265704106_QVnZkL2  Canon 5D Mark II, Canon 24-105L, Canon 135L, Canon 40D, Canon 50 f/1.4, Tokina 12-24
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BIGALTECH Member 64 posts Joined Feb 2010 Location: South Florida More info | Apr 26, 2011 19:34 | #2 I think you captured her excitement quite well! Canon 7D| 28-135 IS | 70-200 2.8L IS | 580EXII | 430EXII
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Apr 26, 2011 19:37 | #3 Nice work....looks like she was relaxed and had some fun....how about you? Was it fun for you too? Ann Robinson
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Apr 26, 2011 20:10 | #4 Thank You Thank You.... Canon 5D Mark II, Canon 24-105L, Canon 135L, Canon 40D, Canon 50 f/1.4, Tokina 12-24
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McBride61 Member  233 posts Joined Jun 2007 More info | Apr 26, 2011 20:27 | #5 I think you did a great job too. The biggest thing is to have the parents happy. Then they'll want to buy more prints (if you sell like that). Keep up the good shooting.
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uOpt Goldmember  2,283 posts Likes: 3 Joined Jun 2009 Location: Boston, MA, USA More info | Apr 26, 2011 21:30 | #6 I think this is great. My imagine composition sucks. I need a heavier lens.
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mrwilt Senior Member 474 posts Likes: 12 Joined Oct 2010 Location: West Virginia More info |
Apr 27, 2011 00:40 | #8 Nice photos. They look 'natural' for someone her age and well done. http://gallerytx.com
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Apr 27, 2011 07:27 | #9 mrwilt wrote in post #12299865 These are very nice! What lens did you mainly use? Pretty much the 135L Canon 5D Mark II, Canon 24-105L, Canon 135L, Canon 40D, Canon 50 f/1.4, Tokina 12-24
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Apr 27, 2011 10:40 | #10 To be honest..... your first senior shoot is awesome. The only thing I'd say is the last one is a little bit dark on her face. Great work mate.
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JayZ235 Senior Member 492 posts Joined Feb 2011 Location: Minneapolis, MinneSnowta More info | Apr 27, 2011 12:14 | #11 Lighting looks pretty darn in all the photos. She has a little bit of the "football shoulders" going on in 2, 3, and 5; just a slight raise/lower or bringing forward/backward of one shoulder will fix that. Blurry cars do not work well in the second photo, nor does the random floating part of the black table in your third photo. The 6th photo needs to be cropped in tighter on her head as part of her hand is cut off. We don't want people thinking she lost her hand senior year! Cropping just above her elbow and just below the bottom of her hair will work and you'll have your knock out photo (as well as a headshot)!
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DigitalPixelsStudio Member  57 posts Joined Apr 2011 Location: WV More info | Apr 27, 2011 12:22 | #12 Very nice first shoot on a Senior. I'm hoping to get better and start shooting portraits like this.
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ccc_javier Goldmember  1,378 posts Joined Aug 2008 Location: Miami More info | Apr 27, 2011 12:29 | #13 |
JMHPhotography Goldmember  4,784 posts Likes: 1 Joined May 2005 Location: New Hampshire More info | Apr 27, 2011 16:20 | #14 |
leeport Senior Member  816 posts Likes: 3 Joined May 2008 More info | Apr 27, 2011 17:48 | #15 Nice work.
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