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Apr 27, 2011 02:25 |  #1

Haven't done a shoot in awhile and I'm a bit rusty. So any feedback would be greatly appreciated :) For those that know me, I hate PP so as usually all that I've done is sharpening, added vignettes to a few, and watermark.

1. (I know it's a little soft... :()

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Apr 27, 2011 02:45 |  #2

Cover up her pimples if you could.

I like #5.


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Apr 27, 2011 08:26 |  #3

Work on:

Lighting. Just don't seem right. Get a reflector
Focusing. Focus on the eyes. Some shots seem OOF.
Processing. PP her face. Get rid of the pimples and smooth her skin like butter

#2 is best. Bring up the exposure, raise the contrast, fix the skin.


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Apr 27, 2011 19:36 |  #4

i agree with removing pimples, i like #5 best




  
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Apr 27, 2011 20:11 |  #5

fotoficient wrote in post #12300915 (external link)
Cover up her pimples if you could.

I like #5.

Razeus wrote in post #12301837 (external link)
Work on:

Lighting. Just don't seem right. Get a reflector
Focusing. Focus on the eyes. Some shots seem OOF.
Processing. PP her face. Get rid of the pimples and smooth her skin like butter

#2 is best. Bring up the exposure, raise the contrast, fix the skin.

rehab wrote in post #12305932 (external link)
i agree with removing pimples, i like #5 best

Thanks for the tips and feedback!




  
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Apr 27, 2011 20:36 |  #6

I know you said you don't like PP, but you really should consider removing the pimples. Especially in the close up shots, it really distracts. You've done nice work, that would be the icing on the cake.


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Apr 27, 2011 22:06 |  #7

suecassidy wrote in post #12306268 (external link)
I know you said you don't like PP, but you really should consider removing the pimples. Especially in the close up shots, it really distracts. You've done nice work, that would be the icing on the cake.

Yeah, I hate it... should find someone to do the PP for me :p

I've taken everyone's advice and started to re-edit them and fix the pimples.




  
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Apr 28, 2011 00:52 |  #8

#5 & #6 for me


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Apr 28, 2011 22:32 |  #9

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#5 & #6 for me

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