My First E-Shoot- Part I -- Weddings & Other Family Events in photography-on-the.net forums

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Apr 28, 2011 18:50 | #1

This was my first engagement shoot. Only 1/3 of the way done with editing. I was very nervous but I think I did okay. Thanks for your feedback.

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Apr 29, 2011 13:49 | #2

I find the frame too distracting, but if you feel you want it - make it consistent.

The 2nd one is ok, I don't like the pose though - and the subjects are too dark. I would actually put them in the middle to get a silhuette.

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Apr 29, 2011 17:51 | #3

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linda baca wrote in post #12312666

This was my first engagement shoot. Only 1/3 of the way done with editing. I was very nervous but I think I did okay. Thanks for your feedback.

Canon 5D Mark II, 1D Mark IV, 580EX II x2, PW Flex TT1 & TT5s (x2), Canon 17-40L (for sale), 24-70L (for sale), 70-200L 2.8 mark ii, 135L, 100 usm macro, Sigma 50 1.4,. Software: Lightroom 3, Photoshop CS4. WTB: 16-35 2.8 ii, Sigma 85 1.4

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Apr 30, 2011 19:32 | #4

Compression artifacts makes it kinda difficult to judge, but...

#1: Looks washed out. Hand is partially chopped off.
#2: Right side looks bright and distracting. Looks crooked. Perhaps crop tighter?

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