don't know if i over did it cc pls, thanks
JakAHearts Cream of the Crop More info | Apr 30, 2011 10:49 | #2 It looks a lot like a pure RAW file to me. (I think they are out of focus to start though) The eyes could take a good dose of sharpening,(I think they are out of focus to start though) the black level raised and some saturation increase. But thats just me. Shane
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jeppoy Goldmember 1,305 posts Likes: 6 Joined Sep 2009 More info | Apr 30, 2011 11:36 | #3 it looks dull and out of focus or just soft. Can't really find where is your focus point, are you using Servo Mode? I'm not too sure what's overdone here. No I'm not a photographer, I just shoot with Canon DSLR with those lenses with red thingy...
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Apr 30, 2011 12:07 | #4 really don't know why its like this when i upload it ill try again Gear list: 7d, 50d, xti, EOS 66 film, Canon FTB,sigma 18-35 1.8 art len, EF 24-105L, 70-200f4. Manfrotto 190xpro, sirui g20x. BR metro.
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jeppoy Goldmember 1,305 posts Likes: 6 Joined Sep 2009 More info | Apr 30, 2011 12:16 | #6 it's a good composition, don't get me wrong but the lighting is really flat. She already have a clean face but I would still brush it up to give drama and appeal to it. She's beautiful to me and I would definitely capitalize on her willingness to pose, if I were you for more practice. Did you use any reflector or anyt strobes on this or just natural lighting. Also, her eyes is very distracting with the reflection. No I'm not a photographer, I just shoot with Canon DSLR with those lenses with red thingy...
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JakAHearts Cream of the Crop More info | Apr 30, 2011 12:22 | #7 Looks a bit underexposed to me also. Sharpness looks a lot better on the second shot. Shane
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so true, just natural light. i was trying to emphasize the eyes and lips not really sure if i over sat. them. here is another photo from the same day. Gear list: 7d, 50d, xti, EOS 66 film, Canon FTB,sigma 18-35 1.8 art len, EF 24-105L, 70-200f4. Manfrotto 190xpro, sirui g20x. BR metro.
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JakAHearts Cream of the Crop More info | Apr 30, 2011 12:39 | #9 |
jeppoy Goldmember 1,305 posts Likes: 6 Joined Sep 2009 More info | Apr 30, 2011 12:48 | #10 thats a complete 180 from the first one, now I can see the PP. You're losing details on some parts. No I'm not a photographer, I just shoot with Canon DSLR with those lenses with red thingy...
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Apr 30, 2011 12:50 | #11 thanks, with the first one i was experimenting on editing the eyes and lips during lr then cs with a twist in overlay i chose that pic coz its the only one i haven't touch in the set. don't really know if the eyes and lips came out ok or over sat. Gear list: 7d, 50d, xti, EOS 66 film, Canon FTB,sigma 18-35 1.8 art len, EF 24-105L, 70-200f4. Manfrotto 190xpro, sirui g20x. BR metro.
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Apr 30, 2011 12:52 | #12 jeppoy wrote in post #12322539 thats a complete 180 from the first one, now I can see the PP. You're losing details on some parts. thanks, i used some (a lot) blur to give it some drama. Gear list: 7d, 50d, xti, EOS 66 film, Canon FTB,sigma 18-35 1.8 art len, EF 24-105L, 70-200f4. Manfrotto 190xpro, sirui g20x. BR metro.
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paradiddleluke Goldmember 3,594 posts Likes: 108 Joined Nov 2009 Location: Chicago, Illinois More info | Apr 30, 2011 17:22 | #13 wayyyy over softened if you ask me, i like the vibrance of the last one but the skin just looks like its all out of focus cause of the softening. what program are you using to process? Website
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Apr 30, 2011 18:36 | #14 paradiddleluke wrote in post #12323585 wayyyy over softened if you ask me, i like the vibrance of the last one but the skin just looks like its all out of focus cause of the softening. what program are you using to process? yes i think i gave it to much g. blur i used 15% and toned it down to 50% im using CS5 Gear list: 7d, 50d, xti, EOS 66 film, Canon FTB,sigma 18-35 1.8 art len, EF 24-105L, 70-200f4. Manfrotto 190xpro, sirui g20x. BR metro.
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jeppoy Goldmember 1,305 posts Likes: 6 Joined Sep 2009 More info | Apr 30, 2011 19:00 | #15 try blending it with soft light and then turn down the opacity No I'm not a photographer, I just shoot with Canon DSLR with those lenses with red thingy...
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