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May 02, 2011 23:23 |  #1

Would love some feedback from this shoot I did awhile back. Minimal PP done as usual.

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May 02, 2011 23:46 |  #2

I especially like how the #3 portrays a strong and confident woman. I'd be tempted to fix the hair maze to the left of her eye.

#4 would, I think, benefit from removing the street light next to her head.

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May 02, 2011 23:49 |  #3

Thanks for the feedback, George!




  
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May 03, 2011 01:31 |  #4

love the set, but i love #1 the most!


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May 03, 2011 03:20 |  #5

rwong2k wrote in post #12337773 (external link)
love the set, but i love #1 the most!

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May 03, 2011 08:29 |  #6

1 is sweet. Can you do something about the stray hair and spots to the right of her head? I keep getting drawn to it. I really like 4 too. Nice work.


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May 03, 2011 08:42 |  #7

Also could easily remove some of the acne in PP.


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May 03, 2011 14:40 |  #8

Seamus69 wrote in post #12338729 (external link)
1 is sweet. Can you do something about the stray hair and spots to the right of her head? I keep getting drawn to it. I really like 4 too. Nice work.

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Also could easily remove some of the acne in PP.

Thanks guys, I'll do a re-edit when I get some time off this weekend :)




  
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May 03, 2011 22:04 |  #9

If you use PS,it well look even more perfect


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May 04, 2011 00:18 |  #10

I like the use of the cheap regular lights on the background in #2.
It's different.




  
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May 04, 2011 01:32 |  #11

Like the set, nicely done, next time if you can encourage her to show some nice pearly white teeth when she smiles. Her half smile just doesnt work for me




  
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May 04, 2011 02:10 |  #12

Great set. I like them all.


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May 04, 2011 02:20 |  #13

fiona0207 wrote in post #12343247 (external link)
If you use PS,it well look even more perfect

Yeah, I'll do a re-edit over the weekend. Thanks for the feedback! :)

Morto wrote in post #12343845 (external link)
I like the use of the cheap regular lights on the background in #2.
It's different.

It's all I had available :p

Niveks wrote in post #12344081 (external link)
Like the set, nicely done, next time if you can encourage her to show some nice pearly white teeth when she smiles. Her half smile just doesnt work for me

JTX wrote in post #12344175 (external link)
Great set. I like them all.

Thanks for the feedback!




  
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May 04, 2011 04:12 |  #14

hey, I think the 4th one is the best of all the set.
the 5th one i don't like at all, lack of sharpness, not in a good way.


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May 04, 2011 04:31 |  #15

EdenBarLev wrote in post #12344399 (external link)
hey, I think the 4th one is the best of all the set.
the 5th one i don't like at all, lack of sharpness, not in a good way.

Thanks for the feedback, Eden!




  
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