My first victim!

Great images. There's nothing wrong with the processing on any of them.

Cant tell if the reds are over saturated because my laptop automatically over saturates reds to the max..... cant adjust it either or it freaks out and turns everything green... -_- Anyway... great set! Makes me wanna go grab a 85 1.8

peyday rly nice photos

but http://peyday17.smugmu​g.com …q/0/XL/joy%20ro​ad1-XL.jpg is awesome !!!
nice job !

Nice series! Nice comps and poses. She has gorgeous eyes and you really showed those off.

Sergey f wrote in post #12351416
peyday rly nice photos

but http://peyday17.smugmu​g.com …q/0/XL/joy%20ro​ad1-XL.jpg is awesome !!!
nice job !

Thanks a lot! That was one of my favorites for sure.

lindsaytblum wrote in post #12351999
Nice series! Nice comps and poses. She has gorgeous eyes and you really showed those off.

I was really excited. Her eyes are definitely awesome!

Yoinks! Those are some very dangerous eyes! I must say, your photos got much better as i went through them. Went from over sharpening and slightly awkward poses to dynamite 6th image! You captured her gorgeous eyes very well here. Best photo in the set with #8 being a runner up. I'd suggest having her bring a friend (if you were to shoot her again) just so she is more comfortable in front of the camera. Her smiles seem a bit forced and getting some laughter in there would do wonders for the photos

very pretty eyes .. nicely captured

The first one seems over sharpened a little. 3 5 and 6 ROCK! I also do think the orange is a little bit over saturated and could use a tad bit of backing off, but NOT much.

Great work mate. Keep it up!

First thoughts - beautiful eyes - are they oversharpened a bit (I don't have my glasses on right now)... Then it turned to DAMN! I am not worried about the orange - it is supposed to be loud - its orange.

Lovely shots, for its a little bit red.... so I experimented a lil, hope you dont mind. I did a little cross process and brought the reds down and I also brought the brightness up! This is my take, ofcourse you can spend more time, this is a quick edit!

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PeyDay17 wrote in post #12348872
I was worried about them being oversaturated. My monitor isn't calibrated yet...

Yep, all natural light. I shot all these with my XSi and my 85 1.8, I love this lens! I had my nifty but it had some focus issues?!

Even before I got to read this I was thinking these photos were shot with the 85mm, I think this is my next lens, I see what you have done with it and I'm breath taken.

They're great, she's a very pretty guinea pig
I do agree about the saturation, especially wearing a bright orange jumper, it's a bit much.

Looks old in the 1st one; Looks Depressed in the 2nd one; Asking to get run over in the 3rd; Fake smile in the 4th; Took her medicine and cant find a chair in the 5th; "Yei I had lunch" in the 6th; Clinically diagnosed as suicidal in the 7th; Not a jumper,definitely a cutter in the 8th. lol I kid I kid.

No.4,6,9 is my fav. Overall it seems that there is some over saturation and too much skin blur. I would say if you're editing Raw in LR. then>> Bring up the Fill Light,move the clarity up by about 20. Bring down the color temp just about about 200. and you're good.

pictures look good, but her smile is waaaay fake. make her laugh next time, get a genuine smile out of her

markspan6243 wrote in post #12355082
pictures look good, but her smile is waaaay fake. make her laugh next time, get a genuine smile out of her

I know...my favorite is 9 because she was laughing at me and i managed to catch it. This was the first time she has ever done this. She is excited to go again so hopefully she'll be more relaxed.