1st Semi Senior Shoot!

Really my first ever shoot.. lol its kinda just messing around but he was posing forreal so its semi real ahahah c&c is appreciated!

The exposure is pretty good overall on both of them. The problem I see is the light is casting some harsh shadows on the face in both of them, other than that they look pretty good. I like your tones in these images. I really like the 2nd one. Keep up the good work mate.

poses and lighting ok, but be aware of harsh shadows on the face, and "a beer, a beach" t-shirt might not be what a senior wants to see 20 year from now in their photos, also be aware of the background his hair disappears into the dark roofs of the houses behind him, also do you really want those houses in your pictures?

I agree with those above; and the highlight on the building from the setting sun to the right of him is pretty distracting...

Thanks guys! ill try to fix those.. :] when i used my umbrella felt like there wasnt enuff light so i just took it off to see what it would be like.. hahaah