Pregnant Sister-In-Law at the beach.....

Took these in Huntington Beach, CA of my sister-in-law and her Fiancé
If you all could, please C&C as much as you all would like. I welcome all input so I can improve my shooting and PP skills.. Many thanks in advance!

You caught some fine shots. Overall, though, the focus seems soft and the temperature a bit cold.

I think you did a good job with these, I like the last one the best. I wonder if the hand closest to the camera in that shot would have been better placed cradling the underside of her belly? The hand far side is perfect, love the way her hand is so relaxed and fingers curved.

I agree with the comment about them being too cool. I understand that was your choice of processing but given that it is a beach shoot, I don't know that it works as well as even black and white might. Love that you got the "Ruby's" in the background, on the pier.