C&C PLEASE!

Tell me what you think what did i do wrong?

Quick Shoot for my friend, there is two more i dont feel worthy :/

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all look pretty damn amazing to me...

Lol, sarcasm is not C&C.. haha thnx. it just didnt feel right to me :/

I'm not a pro in the least, but here's my $.02

#1 - nice lighting, bokeh, but I think she would look more "solid" if her feet were closer together
#2 - less headroom, more fill light on the left side of her face
#3 - I digg this one
#4 - put her in some shade or something to cut out the harsh shadows
#5 - I digg this one too, just 2 nitpicks: clone out the little branch in the top right & possibly dodge her face a little brighter
#6 - the harsh light strikes again

cheers, John

Thanks man. The ones with harsh light i really wanted the scene, lol .

Ill work on the little things like the headroom, ive been overdoing
it i think.. lol thnx man!

I will give you my 2 cents
1) I like it, but wish the face was "lit" better.
2) the face is very central, as commented earlier.
3) nice moment, I like it.
4) I like this too, wish the right camera side was lit a bit better.
5) I don't like the pose, too many broken lines... (her arms)
6) nice expression but you only have backlight and fill, but no front.

Maybe a reflector to reflect some light back on the face for 1), 4) and 6)?

thnx man! i was gonna get a reflector, but kinda poor. lol

for 1 & 5...
1- a reflector would have been perfect right?
5- What should i have corrected with the post? her right arm not being cut off?

No worries.
Yup, a reflector should be perfect for #1. Just a bit of light on her face, that's all you need.
For number 5 - that is the pose, not sure what you can do with that in the post. The tree cuts off her left hand, and the joints are lined up "too square" to each other. if you follow the line from her left hand to the right one, the lines form a stair case shape.

It feels like the lighting is uneven on her or the PP you did caused the lighting to look funny. Almost like a white tint is over photos 1 and 2 making it look cloudy in a way. What PP did you use?

Nice series, really like #1.

REALLY nice pics here! Some of these have some hotspots you might wanna watch, but other than that I don't see much to fix.
You should get a reflector, and someone to hold it! That would fix the light problem.
Great pp!

Meri