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May 28, 2011 22:23 |  #1

Hi all,

It's been a while since I've posted pictures for critiquing. I know I've improved as a photographer, but I want to get some feedback on areas where I'm still lacking. I'm providing 8 images, a mix of what I thought were strong and weak photos.

If you could, please give me your two favorite images and why, then your two least favorite images and why. Hopefully in your explanation of why you didn't like the photo, you could offer me your take on how to improve it. Here is a link to the blog post with more photos: Blog (external link)

Thank you!

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IMAGE: http://verentchan.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/VCP3D11A-1012-750x500.jpg
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IMAGE: http://verentchan.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/VCP3D11A-1031-750x500.jpg
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IMAGE: http://verentchan.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/VCP3D11A-1080-2-750x500.jpg
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IMAGE: http://verentchan.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/VCP3D11A-1103-333x500.jpg
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IMAGE: http://verentchan.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/VCP3D11A-1163-333x500.jpg
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IMAGE: http://verentchan.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/VCP3D11A-1167-333x500.jpg
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IMAGE: http://verentchan.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/VCP3D11A-1242-333x500.jpg
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IMAGE: http://verentchan.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/VCP3D11A-1337-750x500.jpg

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May 29, 2011 21:45 |  #2

The first few seem a little OOF to me but they have great expressions.


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May 29, 2011 22:51 |  #3

Michaelmjc wrote in post #12501356 (external link)
The first few seem a little OOF to me but they have great expressions.

Thank you for your comments. Yeah, I'm still getting used to shooting at f/2.0...The first one, their eyes and mouths are sharp at 100%, but by the time it gets to the edge of their face, it's blurred. The 2nd one looks like I front-focused a little.


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