C&C on family child shoot

Hi All,

posted this in family section but no takers on any C&C so apologies for double posting. Just wanted a bit of feedback on below images if possible.

boy did I have to work hard for the smiles with this little one, if the finger wasn't in the mouth it was up her nose!!! Any feedback appreciated! Thick skin donned!

Thanks, Ange

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Not sure why no takers, these are lovely photos, especially the black and white ones.

There are only two things I would comment on, and thats cropping on both accounts. For the very first picture, I'd crop out some of the adults as they're distracting having so much of them in. I'd clip off from his right arm (the one thats holding her hand) at his sleeve, upwards, and perhaps a slight amount of the grass to centre the picture abit more.

The second one is the "family farm" shot. There's too much of the building in view. Again it's only a cropping issue, but I found it distracting to see so much grey.

Great photos though, and I wouldn't worry about the hand in mouth too much, it's very cute in the pictures.

Thanks Canon.. Have changed the crop on both of them. I'd already picked up on the first one with her hair in the shot and re-cropped it, but wasn't decided on the water tank shot. It looks better with the crop though! thanks!

Beautiful

Great shots. Very well executed.

Great photos! Beautiful family

Thanks for the lovely feedback!

Amazing shots

Very nice, sharp and beautiful.

Love the photos. I was wondering what lens you used and what you did post processing wise? I love the tone and the feel of these.

With the exception of the first one where the cropping hasn't worked, you have produced a lovely set of images, so well done

David