PhilF Cream of the Crop 5,737 posts Likes: 609 Joined Jan 2010 Location: Valencia, CA More info | Jun 05, 2011 17:42 | #1 |
lolleey Junior Member 23 posts Joined Jun 2011 More info | Jun 05, 2011 19:41 | #2 Great shot, i love how you have the guy in the background.
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kuraz Senior Member 624 posts Joined Aug 2009 Location: Louisiana More info | Jun 05, 2011 19:46 | #3 I think the composition should have been a little different. It looks good but think you could have gotten an amazing shot if the comp was changed around a lil.
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kuraz Senior Member 624 posts Joined Aug 2009 Location: Louisiana More info | Jun 05, 2011 19:49 | #4 Maybe lower having her in the left third of the frame and have the guy at the right side of the frame. I Think its the fact that she is centered and the crop that is throwing it off for me
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PhilF THREAD STARTER Cream of the Crop 5,737 posts Likes: 609 Joined Jan 2010 Location: Valencia, CA More info | Jun 05, 2011 20:34 | #5 lolleey wrote in post #12541870 Great shot, i love how you have the guy in the background. thanks kuraz wrote in post #12541892 I think the composition should have been a little different. It looks good but think you could have gotten an amazing shot if the comp was changed around a lil. kuraz wrote in post #12541901 Maybe lower having her in the left third of the frame and have the guy at the right side of the frame. I Think its the fact that she is centered and the crop that is throwing it off for me thanks for you suggestions. http://philfernandezphotography.com
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Jun 05, 2011 20:53 | #6 I have to disagree with the comments above. That guy is not THAT ugly. Canon 6D - 24-70L 2.8, 24-100L 4.0, Samyung 82mm 1.4, EF 70-200 f4L IS - 50mm 1.8
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PhilF THREAD STARTER Cream of the Crop 5,737 posts Likes: 609 Joined Jan 2010 Location: Valencia, CA More info | Jun 05, 2011 21:07 | #7 Fizzler wrote in post #12542215 I have to disagree with the comments above. That guy is not THAT ugly. LOL you tell me ...the guy is working actor ... he just got bored and tried doing this gig. http://philfernandezphotography.com
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Jun 05, 2011 21:53 | #8 The first one she doesn't look like Moses or herding sheep, what's with the prop? Is there a copy-paste fix on the dirt in the bottom right? Too much duplication in the dirt.The second looks like a convertible Caddy is parked out back. Is that really a car mirror and windshield or I just can't make it out in the small version. Both appear a tad oversharpened. Dave
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PhilF THREAD STARTER Cream of the Crop 5,737 posts Likes: 609 Joined Jan 2010 Location: Valencia, CA More info | Jun 06, 2011 00:57 | #9 ChunkyDA wrote in post #12542564 The first one she doesn't look like Moses or herding sheep, what's with the prop? Is there a copy-paste fix on the dirt in the bottom right? Too much duplication in the dirt.The second looks like a convertible Caddy is parked out back. Is that really a car mirror and windshield or I just can't make it out in the small version. Both appear a tad oversharpened. LOL ... okay.. thanks for the comment. http://philfernandezphotography.com
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OneEyedJack Senior Member 608 posts Joined May 2007 More info | Jun 06, 2011 04:30 | #10 Im not sure how you thought that terrible cloning on the dirt would work, or even go un-noticed. Im not sure how it even went un-noticed for 8 posts. Other than that and the over sharpening, i like them both
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PhilF THREAD STARTER Cream of the Crop 5,737 posts Likes: 609 Joined Jan 2010 Location: Valencia, CA More info | Jun 06, 2011 13:16 | #11 OneEyedJack wrote in post #12543955 Im not sure how you thought that terrible cloning on the dirt would work, or even go un-noticed. Im not sure how it even went un-noticed for 8 posts. Other than that and the over sharpening, i like them both thanks for your comment. http://philfernandezphotography.com
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