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Jun 05, 2011 17:42 |  #1

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Jun 05, 2011 19:41 |  #2

Great shot, i love how you have the guy in the background.




  
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Jun 05, 2011 19:46 |  #3

I think the composition should have been a little different. It looks good but think you could have gotten an amazing shot if the comp was changed around a lil.


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Jun 05, 2011 19:49 |  #4

Maybe lower having her in the left third of the frame and have the guy at the right side of the frame. I Think its the fact that she is centered and the crop that is throwing it off for me


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Jun 05, 2011 20:34 |  #5

lolleey wrote in post #12541870 (external link)
Great shot, i love how you have the guy in the background.

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I think the composition should have been a little different. It looks good but think you could have gotten an amazing shot if the comp was changed around a lil.

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Maybe lower having her in the left third of the frame and have the guy at the right side of the frame. I Think its the fact that she is centered and the crop that is throwing it off for me

thanks for you suggestions.


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Jun 05, 2011 20:53 |  #6

I have to disagree with the comments above. That guy is not THAT ugly.


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Jun 05, 2011 21:07 |  #7

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I have to disagree with the comments above. That guy is not THAT ugly.

LOL you tell me ...the guy is working actor ... he just got bored and tried doing this gig.

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Jun 05, 2011 21:53 |  #8

The first one she doesn't look like Moses or herding sheep, what's with the prop? Is there a copy-paste fix on the dirt in the bottom right? Too much duplication in the dirt.The second looks like a convertible Caddy is parked out back. Is that really a car mirror and windshield or I just can't make it out in the small version. Both appear a tad oversharpened.


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Jun 06, 2011 00:57 |  #9

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The first one she doesn't look like Moses or herding sheep, what's with the prop? Is there a copy-paste fix on the dirt in the bottom right? Too much duplication in the dirt.The second looks like a convertible Caddy is parked out back. Is that really a car mirror and windshield or I just can't make it out in the small version. Both appear a tad oversharpened.

LOL ... okay.. thanks for the comment.


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Jun 06, 2011 04:30 |  #10

Im not sure how you thought that terrible cloning on the dirt would work, or even go un-noticed. Im not sure how it even went un-noticed for 8 posts. Other than that and the over sharpening, i like them both


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Jun 06, 2011 13:16 |  #11

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Im not sure how you thought that terrible cloning on the dirt would work, or even go un-noticed. Im not sure how it even went un-noticed for 8 posts. Other than that and the over sharpening, i like them both

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