Criticism wanted Thanks
doesn't look sharp here. looks better in LR but I still like the image
domat Senior Member 485 posts Likes: 14 Joined Jun 2010 Location: New York More info | Jun 05, 2011 21:48 | #1 Criticism wanted Thanks doesn't look sharp here. looks better in LR but I still like the image
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Jun 05, 2011 23:10 | #2 1 and 3 have too busy of a background. Draws away from the model. 5D Mkll Gripped | 50D Gripped | 40D | 20D | Canon 70 - 200 2.8L IS USM | Canon 50 1.4 | Sigma 17 - 70 2.8 - 4 OS USM | 580EX II |
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fazm Member 222 posts Joined Mar 2011 More info | Jun 05, 2011 23:25 | #3 I think 1 is awesome. I wish you had some soft fill light on her face. Fun Fact: My name is Charlie!
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bboehm Senior Member 706 posts Joined Mar 2007 Location: Chicago, IL More info | Jun 05, 2011 23:29 | #4 Yeah, I agree 1 & 3 have too much going on in the background. I really like #2. 7D, 50D, EFS 17-85mm IS, 24-70mm f/2.8L, 50mm f/1.2L, 70-200 f/2.8L IS II, 2X Extender III, Calumet Genesis 400, Speedlite 430EX, Pocket Wizards
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fazm Member 222 posts Joined Mar 2011 More info | Jun 06, 2011 00:21 | #5 If anything, I'd try to desaturate the background on #3 a bit and increase the exposure on her. I like the location, but it takes work to make the portrait stand out. Also, is the focus off on #3? Fun Fact: My name is Charlie!
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Jun 06, 2011 07:00 | #6 Thanks for the thoughts guys.
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kuraz Senior Member 624 posts Joined Aug 2009 Location: Louisiana More info | Jun 06, 2011 10:12 | #7 The on camera flash in number 1 isn't flattering. It casted a shadow on her from the leaves in the foreground and put a shadow of her on the background.
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DanThoman Goldmember  2,646 posts Likes: 124 Joined Aug 2009 Location: georgia lake country More info | Jun 06, 2011 12:04 | #8 I like the background in #1 and #3, It adds to the mood. Dan
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