Just looking for a little feedback.
ConverseMan Senior Member  766 posts Likes: 3 Joined Dec 2010 Location: Kansas City, MO More info | Jun 05, 2011 23:00 | #2 I would say a little fill flash would have helped open up her face just a little. Right now the dress seems like the center of attention, not the fact that it is a portrait. Great DOF tho Nathan W.
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GrendelKhan Senior Member 548 posts Likes: 48 Joined Apr 2011 More info | Jun 05, 2011 23:55 | #3 The face is very dark. Use a reflector or some flash to fill in. Also, pose looks a little awkward. Might work with a tight crop.
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JoJo2fast Goldmember  1,759 posts Likes: 94 Joined Feb 2008 Location: Seattle, WA More info | Jun 06, 2011 00:29 | #4 Either use fill like the others have suggested or just have her tilt her face up, it's pointed down and in which makes it darker. Bringing her face up just a tad and tilting it to her left would have probably solved the problem. Jordan
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bboehm Senior Member 706 posts Joined Mar 2007 Location: Chicago, IL More info | Jun 06, 2011 00:50 | #5 I like the DOF. Also agree that the face area is too dark. 7D, 50D, EFS 17-85mm IS, 24-70mm f/2.8L, 50mm f/1.2L, 70-200 f/2.8L IS II, 2X Extender III, Calumet Genesis 400, Speedlite 430EX, Pocket Wizards
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little more light on the face, background is nice.
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