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mosabi
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Jun 12, 2011 08:24 |  #1

Hello everyone, I have completed my first attempt at a shoot. My neighbors were my first victim. It was awesome of them to give me the opportunity. I got several photos but here are a couple I'll start with sharing. I am by all means not a professional. I have to start somewhere I guess :) Please let me know what you think. I still haven't done any cloning, meaning I need to remove the tree from a head.

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Jun 12, 2011 08:31 |  #2

#4 is the best. the first the background is distracting.


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Jun 12, 2011 08:40 |  #3

Congratulations on your first shoot and uploading.

I like the poses in all photos, but not a fan of the framing in pictures 1 and 2. Part of mom's knee and baby's feet are missing in those. 1 also looks a little overexposed.

Number 3 is my favorite of the group. You may want to post process some of these photos to brighten up the color a bit.

Keep shooting and sharing!


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Jun 12, 2011 08:52 |  #4

Aperture1.4 wrote in post #12579395 (external link)
#4 is the best. the first the background is distracting.



Background yes I know, wish it was a nice blue sky last night...


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Jun 12, 2011 08:54 |  #5

sgdkstar wrote in post #12579419 (external link)
Congratulations on your first shoot and uploading.

I like the poses in all photos, but not a fan of the framing in pictures 1 and 2. Part of mom's knee and baby's feet are missing in those. 1 also looks a little overexposed.

Number 3 is my favorite of the group. You may want to post process some of these photos to brighten up the color a bit.

Keep shooting and sharing!

Thank you for the encouraging words. I appreciate your critique. I obviously need to work on a few things thats for sure. We had some clouds moving in last night and you can see that by the background. Last night was the nicest day of the week around here.


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