Some of my first shots as a assistant

Any critique is great. Thanks in advance

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1- hair on her face, photo becomes unusable.
2-nice candid snap i guess. client probably wouldn't want it since it doesn't flatter her well.
3-usable with a tighter crop. i dont think the half-cut guy on the right side contributes to the image at all.

emdzey01 wrote in post #12634465
1- hair on her face, photo becomes unusable.
2-nice candid snap i guess. client probably wouldn't want it since it doesn't flatter her well.
3-usable with a tighter crop. i dont think the half-cut guy on the right side contributes to the image at all.

1. I dont agree with this - No photographer (I hope) is going to stop the couple on the way out of their ceremony to clean up the hair. I think this is totally useable, and a good shot.

2. Looks a bit soft on her face. Not a bad shot, but not anything special.

3. This shot really depends on how the main shot. If they shot tight, you shoot wide. I would have centered them, and I think you are at an odd cropping size anyways. If I shoot wide, I like it to be just wide enough to fit them in with a little head and foot room. I would have shot much wider or much tighter.

Red Tie Photography wrote in post #12634801
1. I dont agree with this - No photographer (I hope) is going to stop the couple on the way out of their ceremony to clean up the hair. I think this is totally useable, and a good shot.

2. Looks a bit soft on her face. Not a bad shot, but not anything special.

3. This shot really depends on how the main shot. If they shot tight, you shoot wide. I would have centered them, and I think you are at an odd cropping size anyways. If I shoot wide, I like it to be just wide enough to fit them in with a little head and foot room. I would have shot much wider or much tighter.

Yup. Agreed. I think #3 has the most potential. I would just crop tighter and get rid of distracting elements.