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Jun 24, 2011 11:59 |  #1

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Jun 24, 2011 12:46 |  #2

Is this for a wedding album?


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Jun 24, 2011 12:50 |  #3

1 and 2 are nice.. wth happened to #3? Holy distortion!


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Jun 24, 2011 12:51 |  #4

Phil - these are some nice images, but I'd suggest that less is more for a few of these. Don't feel that you should pack the entire page solidly with images. They will stand on there own much better if they have a bit more open "matting" around them. Also, several are a bit repetitive. Retain the stronger of a series and that will improve the aesthetic of the overall arrangement.

The dress lighting and details are very nice as is the series on the groom - well captured. The center/bottom dancing image looks flared and distorted - too narrow. Delete that with the images that are too much alike. Overall I think you are on the right track. You just need to feature the best work. - Stu


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Jun 24, 2011 18:28 |  #5

not a wedding album...these are for ads in my wedding photo site.

thanks guys...really appreciate the suggestions and comments


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Jun 24, 2011 18:36 |  #6

hi - the groom shots are awesome.

consider keeping the 3rd set all rectangular - not crazy about the shots overlapping.


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Jun 25, 2011 12:54 |  #7

#3 is really distorted..take out a few images imo.


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Jun 26, 2011 21:59 |  #8

dkim82 wrote in post #12652816 (external link)
hi - the groom shots are awesome.

consider keeping the 3rd set all rectangular - not crazy about the shots overlapping.

Svetlana wrote in post #12655920 (external link)
#3 is really distorted..take out a few images imo.

thanks guys.. I agree ... some of the images are redundant and when I added it in the collage I stretched the image making it distorted


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