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Jun 26, 2011 16:05 |  #1

shot these under a low light situation, not ideal but i had to deal with it and deliver a product that i can be proud of. i think i did a good job but i would like to see what i could do or edit to make these even better.




  
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Jun 26, 2011 23:07 |  #2

should i post these in a larger size? are they too small to critique?




  
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Jun 26, 2011 23:11 |  #3

I like em... I think they're framed a little too tight. I'd want to see the edges of the dress if I was the bride. Also, the dress looks a little hot?




  
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Jun 26, 2011 23:24 |  #4

this is not a bride, maybe i should have mentioned it was a quinceaƱera. the dress is a bit hot in some spots but i have recovered it and tried to keep it as natural as my skill can make it. i exposed for her skin, shot raw, and am taking about 1.5 stops out of the dress in post

edit: this was my first time dealing with a white dress and did not realize how difficult it could be but i tried not to panic and just tried to make sure her skin tones looked good in camera.




  
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Jun 27, 2011 00:25 |  #5

The only thing that bothers me is the not-so-detailed dress skirt...looks overexposed...otherwis​e, great shots!


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Jun 27, 2011 19:54 |  #6

i hate to be a pest but i would really appreciate a little more feedback on these. thanks




  
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Jun 27, 2011 20:57 |  #7

oceanbeast wrote in post #12667805 (external link)
i hate to be a pest but i would really appreciate a little more feedback on these. thanks

Why did you delete them so quickly? Give them a little time.


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Jun 27, 2011 23:03 |  #8

oceanbeast wrote in post #12667805 (external link)
i hate to be a pest but i would really appreciate a little more feedback on these. thanks

Well.tough to say anything now;) Keep them up, take the C&C and learn from it?


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Jun 28, 2011 00:23 |  #9

took them down because i was too scared they might get stolen, yes i know that i am paranoid but these haven't even been viewed by my client and i felt like keeping them up here indefinitely might cause them to be downloaded. i will repost others from the set after my client views them, thanks




  
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Jun 29, 2011 21:13 |  #10

If you post them 640-480, there's not much chance anyone would be able to do anything with them.


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