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C & C on my Fake Skies please

 
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Jul 10, 2011 13:57 |  #1

They look fine to me but do they look fine to make public?

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Jul 10, 2011 14:56 |  #2

I'd put number 2 on the wall if that was my building...after the scaffolding was removed.


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Jul 10, 2011 15:07 |  #3

Number 2 looks great to me. On number 1, the deeper blues seem a bit unnatural to my eyes.


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Jul 10, 2011 20:07 |  #4

^Agree with Ken. #2 looks spot on!

On number one the dark blue seems out of place.
Although thats a quick easy fix!
Overall, great job!
(And good composition in the original photos too!)




  
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Jul 10, 2011 20:17 |  #5

Both are great but I'd crop a little off the bottom of # 1.

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Jul 10, 2011 20:44 |  #6

I really like both, I would hang that cobalt poster on my wall


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Jul 10, 2011 20:53 |  #7

Viva-photography wrote in post #12736149 (external link)
^Agree with Ken. #2 looks spot on!

On number one the dark blue seems out of place.
Although thats a quick easy fix!
Overall, great job!
(And good composition in the original photos too!)

How would you fix the dark blue?




  
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Jul 10, 2011 21:04 |  #8

You've got image editing turned on... I'll cook something up real quick!




  
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Jul 10, 2011 21:59 |  #9

The angle of the shadow on the 1st picture shouts 'fake' background! but it is a cool looking image... it just doesn't work for me...


Comments and critiques are always welcomed and appreciated!
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Jul 10, 2011 22:08 |  #10

You forgot to fix the lighting in the passenger window and rear windshield in image #1.


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Jul 11, 2011 03:24 |  #11

AbPho wrote in post #12736681 (external link)
You forgot to fix the lighting in the passenger window and rear windshield in image #1.

I was going to post that too !!


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Jul 11, 2011 03:31 |  #12

Viva-photography wrote in post #12736404 (external link)
You've got image editing turned on... I'll cook something up real quick!


if your definition of 'real quick' is six hours...I'd hate to think what your definition of slow would be...:lol:


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Jul 11, 2011 17:31 |  #13

Viva-photography wrote in post #12736404 (external link)
You've got image editing turned on... I'll cook something up real quick!

thanks!




  
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Jul 11, 2011 17:32 |  #14

SeJun wrote in post #12736644 (external link)
The angle of the shadow on the 1st picture shouts 'fake' background! but it is a cool looking image... it just doesn't work for me...

:lol: Thanks, that's why I love people CC my pictures. Because people point out your mistakes that you didn't realize at first and makes you better :)




  
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Jul 11, 2011 18:54 |  #15

wardzach2007 wrote in post #12741423 (external link)
:lol: Thanks, that's why I love people CC my pictures. Because people point out your mistakes that you didn't realize at first and makes you better :)

agreed! :D


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