Local Fashion Shoot

Shot this on Saturday of one of the models that was fashioning clothes for a local charity.
I think she has elegance etc what do you think?

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Exposure is decent. However, the girl in the background who is somewhat looking directly into your camera is a distraction from the main subject. Also just not a big fan of the "staring into space" look on model. If she were looking directly into the camera I feel it would also put more attention to her rather than the girl in the background. However if this is a candid, I take that back.

Hope that helps. Keep up the good work!

agree with the post above, looks like the girl in back is posing more for the picture then the subject is. I would have lowered the shot a bit to expose more of her hands and less head room, but thats just me.

Looks like a snapshot to me, or maybe i just expected something different given the thread title. I agree with the other posters!

the reflection from the post behind her is distracting; she has uneven lighting on her face too giving a more candid shot feel, busy background, ect…

Cheers guys all your comments taken on board.

Shes actually waiting to strut her stuff and it is a candid shot that i thought looked interesting.