Phil & Elsa | First Wedding Ever!

These are just a few snaps from a wedding I did myself this past weekend. It was my first wedding & I had a good amount of time to prepare myself. I would love C&C so please don't hesitate!

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I can't get over the first one. So washed out, colors way off, cool, and OOF or compression but considering the others I'd say OOF.

#2 is flat and dark.

#3 I like...could read the lettering a bit better so tone it down a bit.

#4 Gorgeous capture! Looks like something a jeweler ad.

^Agreed!

2, 3, and 4 are awesome! I like the blown highlights in #3. The bride's dress is a stunner!!

#1 is OOF and very distractingly so.

Number 4 it´s a great shoot.

The best of these is #4. I think #2 could be a decent shot if lightened up or something, it's just too dark.

I have to say that the overall shots are good as far as composition, but the processing is killing them. I would reccomend not going too crazy on the processing until you feel comfortable with just improving a photo straight out of the camera... Go back and just do some standard adjustment to exposure, white balance and contrast and then repost them so we can get a good idea.

#1 could use some straightening. last one is best.

#1 looks like a P&S photo... washed out and colors are just not right...
#2 great comp but very flat...
#3 I like...
#4 again great comp but the pop is missing...

great shot!

Is that lambert castle?