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Jul 14, 2011 06:49 |  #1

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Jul 14, 2011 11:03 |  #2

I like the comp, B&W and DoF. My only nit is that it could be a bit brighter and possibly tone down the highlight on the ornament's wing.

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Jul 14, 2011 11:56 as a reply to  @ GorgeShooter's post |  #3

Here's a reworked version.

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Jul 14, 2011 12:09 as a reply to  @ delthedog's post |  #4

The first is better for contrast, for me, the ornament is too far down the frame?

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Jul 14, 2011 14:46 |  #5

In the first one you can see halos around the shadow of the ornament. The second is better on the halo part. Nice shot, I like #2 better as to it seems to show a little more detail of the ornament.

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Jul 14, 2011 17:05 |  #6

#2 is an improvement

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