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Jul 20, 2011 13:58 |  #1

I caught this during a wedding shoot, the hallway was so dark and I saw this intimate, emotional moment unfolding before my eyes and caught this shot. The bride and mother love this shot -- I know that is what matters - however - I thought I would share and see what some of you thought of this photo. Thanks for comments.


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Jul 21, 2011 15:32 |  #2

Some cropping on this would go a long way, namely get rid of the door jamb on the left. Also, some distortion correction would assist in correcting the perspective in the hallway.

I think with some processing, this image will go from "I love it" to "I love what you did with this already awesome image" from the customer's point of view.


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Jul 21, 2011 16:48 as a reply to  @ CiM_Photography's post |  #3

I agree - I would crop out the hallway siding completely, and a bit off the top (the glare on the top of the door frame is distracting as well). So basically - a bit tigher crop, and then it would be awesome.


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Jul 21, 2011 19:48 |  #4

Here is a quick edit - is this what you were thinking guys? Cropping, and distortion adjustment done.Thanks for the suggestions.


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Jul 21, 2011 20:12 |  #5

that edit is much better. nice.


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Jul 21, 2011 20:15 |  #6

Huge difference! Nice edit! Now put some USM on that and enjoy.


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Doctorh wrote in post #12801387 (external link)
Here is a quick edit - is this what you were thinking guys? Cropping, and distortion adjustment done.Thanks for the suggestions.


This is more like it.


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