Approve the Cookies
This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and our Privacy Policy.
OK
Forums  •   • New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear
Guest
Forums  •   • New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear
Register to forums    Log in

 
FORUMS Photo Sharing & Discussion People 
Thread started 23 Jul 2011 (Saturday) 11:32
Search threadPrev/next
sponsored links (only for non-logged)

Young Love

 
imagesbybarbara
Goldmember
1,790 posts
Gallery: 31 photos
Likes: 80
Joined Oct 2007
Location: Virginia Beach, Virginia
     
Jul 23, 2011 11:32 |  #1

Two 20 y/o finding love for the first time.

IMAGE: http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac95/basauder/IMG_0334.jpg

16-35 2.8L 24-105L 35 1.4L 135L 50 1.4 85 1.8 and 100 macro, 5D, 5D2, 40D, 20D, (3) 550, 2 Sunpak 555, white lighting studio set-up.

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
imagesbybarbara
THREAD ­ STARTER
Goldmember
1,790 posts
Gallery: 31 photos
Likes: 80
Joined Oct 2007
Location: Virginia Beach, Virginia
     
Jul 23, 2011 13:15 |  #2

How about this process?

IMAGE: http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/ac95/basauder/IMG_0334copy.jpg

16-35 2.8L 24-105L 35 1.4L 135L 50 1.4 85 1.8 and 100 macro, 5D, 5D2, 40D, 20D, (3) 550, 2 Sunpak 555, white lighting studio set-up.

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
brokkbloodaxe
Senior Member
331 posts
Likes: 1
Joined Jul 2011
Location: Louisiana
     
Jul 23, 2011 13:32 as a reply to  @ imagesbybarbara's post |  #3

I like the original better, the second looks grainy esp on their skins. Now if you wanted that then it looks like it your intention.


5DC, XSIrebel, 18-55, 75-300, 85 1.8, 70-200L f4,50L sigma ef 500 dg st, cs2, Lightroom 3
flickr (external link)
-David

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
HappySnapper90
Cream of the Crop
5,145 posts
Likes: 3
Joined Aug 2008
Location: Cleveland, Ohio
     
Jul 23, 2011 19:57 |  #4

Not really digging the composition (man cut off, camera position rather low) as well as the empty white sky in the background. Because of the camera position, angle, and composition both people look like they are falling over.




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
JimCapaldi
Goldmember
Avatar
1,157 posts
Likes: 1
Joined Jul 2006
Location: Springfield, PA USA
     
Jul 23, 2011 20:17 as a reply to  @ HappySnapper90's post |  #5

I don't like the angle. You should show more of their faces.


Canon EOS 6D / EF 50 mm 1.4 / EF 24-105mm f/4L IS / EF 70-300 mm 4-5.6 IS / EF 100mm f/2.8L IS
Canon 580EX II Speedlite, 430 EX Speedlite
Photos: http://www.flickr.com/​photos/jcapaldi (external link)

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
imagesbybarbara
THREAD ­ STARTER
Goldmember
1,790 posts
Gallery: 31 photos
Likes: 80
Joined Oct 2007
Location: Virginia Beach, Virginia
     
Jul 23, 2011 20:18 |  #6

HappySnapper90 wrote in post #12811030 (external link)
Not really digging the composition (man cut off, camera position rather low) as well as the empty white sky in the background. Because of the camera position, angle, and composition both people look like they are falling over.


Thanks for the critique, I shot it this way because its a stock image, when you shoot stock you need to leave more space around the frame, if it were a normal shoot I would have been shot totally differently.;)


16-35 2.8L 24-105L 35 1.4L 135L 50 1.4 85 1.8 and 100 macro, 5D, 5D2, 40D, 20D, (3) 550, 2 Sunpak 555, white lighting studio set-up.

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
imagesbybarbara
THREAD ­ STARTER
Goldmember
1,790 posts
Gallery: 31 photos
Likes: 80
Joined Oct 2007
Location: Virginia Beach, Virginia
     
Jul 24, 2011 07:10 |  #7

HappySnapper90 wrote in post #12811030 (external link)
Not really digging the composition (man cut off, camera position rather low) as well as the empty white sky in the background. Because of the camera position, angle, and composition both people look like they are falling over.


I did have him dip her a little too so thats probably why she appears to be tipping. I was thinking romance novel.


16-35 2.8L 24-105L 35 1.4L 135L 50 1.4 85 1.8 and 100 macro, 5D, 5D2, 40D, 20D, (3) 550, 2 Sunpak 555, white lighting studio set-up.

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
HappySnapper90
Cream of the Crop
5,145 posts
Likes: 3
Joined Aug 2008
Location: Cleveland, Ohio
     
Jul 24, 2011 16:30 |  #8

Don't romance novels usually show the faces? You really can't see either face in your photo.




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
imagesbybarbara
THREAD ­ STARTER
Goldmember
1,790 posts
Gallery: 31 photos
Likes: 80
Joined Oct 2007
Location: Virginia Beach, Virginia
     
Jul 24, 2011 19:36 |  #9

HappySnapper90 wrote in post #12814850 (external link)
Don't romance novels usually show the faces? You really can't see either face in your photo.

Don't know I don't read books:rolleyes: Does it bother you that much that you cannot see their faces? I do have plenty other images where there faces are shown this was just a different perspective I was trying.;)


16-35 2.8L 24-105L 35 1.4L 135L 50 1.4 85 1.8 and 100 macro, 5D, 5D2, 40D, 20D, (3) 550, 2 Sunpak 555, white lighting studio set-up.

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
sponsored links (only for non-logged)

1,450 views & 0 likes for this thread, 4 members have posted to it.
Young Love
FORUMS Photo Sharing & Discussion People 
AAA
x 1600
y 1600

Jump to forum...   •  Rules   •  Forums   •  New posts   •  RTAT   •  'Best of'   •  Gallery   •  Gear   •  Reviews   •  Member list   •  Polls   •  Image rules   •  Search   •  Password reset   •  Home

Not a member yet?
Register to forums
Registered members may log in to forums and access all the features: full search, image upload, follow forums, own gear list and ratings, likes, more forums, private messaging, thread follow, notifications, own gallery, all settings, view hosted photos, own reviews, see more and do more... and all is free. Don't be a stranger - register now and start posting!


COOKIES DISCLAIMER: This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and to our privacy policy.
Privacy policy and cookie usage info.


POWERED BY AMASS forum software 2.58forum software
version 2.58 /
code and design
by Pekka Saarinen ©
for photography-on-the.net

Latest registered member was a spammer, and banned as such!
2682 guests, 176 members online
Simultaneous users record so far is 15,144, that happened on Nov 22, 2018

Photography-on-the.net Digital Photography Forums is the website for photographers and all who love great photos, camera and post processing techniques, gear talk, discussion and sharing. Professionals, hobbyists, newbies and those who don't even own a camera -- all are welcome regardless of skill, favourite brand, gear, gender or age. Registering and usage is free.