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Jul 24, 2011 14:24 |  #1
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Welcome to the Art of Photography Exhibition



The Goal of this exhibition is to showcase, evaluate, and learn from the images posted by participants created with a sense of artistic statement. The statement may be planned in advance or naturally occurring.

Entries are not restricted by subject, composition, intent, camera, lens, media type; film or digital, color or monochrome, time of capture, post processing techniques, alternative processes, etc. In others words this is art and you get to express freely. No nudity per POTN rules. Each image can be submitted once in the exhibition.

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State EXIF data and (optionally) a personal statement concerning your entry.

This exhibition is open to everyone and runs weekly. Cutoff time is Sunday 6pm Pacific Standard Time. Scoring cutoff time is Wednesday 6PM PST.

Judging is open to participants and the POTN community.
1st choice is 5 points, 2nd choice is 3 points, and 3rd choice is 1 point. You cannot vote for your image.

The winner of the last exhibition tallies the scores of the judges (by PM) and presents the total results for all images in the current exhibition at the end of the exhibition.

Critique is open to all participants and the top 3 place holders for the current exhibition will be responsible for critiquing the next exhibition. If you do not wish to receive critique state this in your entry.

The exhibition has 3 threads: images, critique (discussion), and social.
Please stick to the right thread for the right content.

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Aug 03, 2011 21:03 |  #2
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Time for discussion. I enjoyed this weeks entries ending 7/31/11.

Gail I like what you are going for here. I would have loved to see driven rain across the frame rather than a few reluctant drops. As it is the drops are a bit of a tease and the de-focused woods do not have enough dimension alone to carry the image in entirety. In general more than one dimension makes a more intriguing image. Imagine if the woods are one dimension, rain a second dimension, and sun beams breaking through across the frame as the third dimension.

Geno this is what I call art literal. Well stated. I can hear the water lapping the steel. I can feel the rust. Not an easy subject to elaborate on and unusual in nature. The setting is open to fantasy based interpretations with different conditions such as long exposures and exotic light.

Allen I love this image because it really busts the rules of composition while delivering a refreshing and gorgeous color contrast in the flower and statue. Unusual is the long statue frame leading line through most of the frame. This has a lifting effect which forces us to the top of the frame. Being right handed and the flower being on a less dominant side serves to balance my mind with the sense of a Buddhist statement in the way the flower is presented. Beautiful work.

Hank the color simply engulfs the senses. I love the sensual softness of the flower stems and the way the different shades of red work off each other. The composition works really well because the lines are organic to nature. This image is perfect for trance induction or an alpha generator.

MDKmedia I like the way you use color here. The image works and is pleasing to the eye creating a visual fantasy around a performer.

Some notes on Forest in Water. Infrared generates a nice juxtaposition of highlights and shadows in nature. I used this effect and gently colored the image to create some contrast in color. The colors are cream, dark blue, and black. The main interest in this image is the reflection of a northern west coast forest in pond water. I inverted the reflection to get this image. Of interest is how the water modulates the reflection creating an impressionist perspective.

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Aug 03, 2011 23:14 as a reply to  @ jetcode's post |  #3

Joe, there was no sun.lol.and it was taken with the silly 70-200...Like I said, I was playin, but I totally get what you are saying.Thank you.


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Aug 03, 2011 23:42 as a reply to  @ Flo's post |  #4
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No worries Gail. I have a particular POV but it isn't the only POV for sure.




  
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Aug 04, 2011 16:10 as a reply to  @ jetcode's post |  #5

jetcode – Very much enjoyed the texture of this image – particularly the way the leafy mass on top retains shape while it dissolves as though it is being pulled or dragged until the tree trunks appear. I used to own an IR filter and never got results like this. A visually satisfying image.

airfrogusmc – This one was my personal favorite. I guess for me it was about the colors and how they perfectly complemented each other. And also for the way my eye sees the shoulder and then follows the arm and then the hand as it appears from the blues/grays/greens until that pop of color smacks me right in the face – visually stimulating.

Flo – A full on downpour would be the only thing to complete this image. I liked the color tones and the textures. Also, you need some fogginess to add additional atmosphere – let’s remember that next time. :p

-g- - I disqualified you immediately for not posting your exif per contest rules. OK, I’m kidding. I (think) I understand the grouping of three but part of me wanted to see below the water surface. I want to see more because, warning, I assumed there was more. I keep one CPL for stuff like this, just in case there’s more to see than what meets the eye. Sorry for projecting into your image.

MDKmedia – I liked this image for its perspective of the performer looking down into the crowd. Now what I also enjoyed is the fact that I don’t see the crowd but my brain makes the connection as though there is an audience. For all I know this could be a dream of a soon-to-be performer, or a daydream/fantasy, or... Colors are pretty cool too.


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Aug 10, 2011 21:57 |  #6
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I really enjoyed the entries this week.

Jason that is a great image. I enjoy the uniqueness and play with light.

Hank it is so rare to get a nice sequence of creatures in flight. The B/W increases the impact.

Gail I really like what you are going for here. The rain is a great texture and the flowers work well. The balance of composition is a little weak but overall the image is really nice. I like the ambiance.




  
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Aug 11, 2011 13:35 |  #7

Juice by jetcode: Unique and surreal feel with juice fragments on the drinking vessel juxtaposed with the swirly bubbles of the drink itself, very nice. You could go to town with this image with different type of lighting through the glass, and perhaps other ingredients.

Flyover by macroshot: My type of shot, I like it. The reverse weighting, birds flying in a descending pattern from left to right, works well here and is something I would do. Nice silhouette effect with cloudy backdrop.

Daisy Deluge by Flo: Nice concept, but I feel left out of the fun. When I see the title, I think a bunch of Daisy's together, but a singular daisy towers above the other sub-dasies leading me to feel more Dictator Daisy rather than Daisy Deluge. I think a different composition could help, angle perhaps. The OOF tree with the hot specular reflections distracts a little. This capture could be so much more, but you are close!

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Aug 12, 2011 01:04 as a reply to  @ Jason C's post |  #8

Oops - sorry folks, I forgot to vote - was out of town. And the wi-fi at the hotel never worked longer than about 2 minutes at a time so I never even checked and pretty much gave up trying to access the web.

As for comments:

Joe - that's kinda different. Good detail in the bubbles, distinct colors, curve of the juice inside assumes the RoT, but the stuff clinging to the sides of the glass...not so much.

Jason - had I voted, this would have been my 1st place for the week. Strangely atmospheric, alien-like in its presentation, and an interesting composition that pulls the viewer in two directions.

Gail - I like this one because it gives the impression of the flowers literally reaching for the moisture. Maybe just clone that bit of red off to the left so I don't keep looking over there though.

As for mine, the only thing I wish I had done differently was open it up a bit for some breathing room. Transitioning from the rugby field to the birds didn't leave me much time to rack that 100-400 but it had a certain something that appealed to me so I kept it.

I'll remember to vote next week!


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Aug 12, 2011 08:06 as a reply to  @ macroshot's post |  #9

Jason had my fav last week too. I have been really busy lately so I'm kinda in and out of here and I was certainly not much help in the voting dept. Sorry...




  
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Aug 12, 2011 12:16 |  #10
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I voted for Jason too so Jason ... there you have it!!!

Hank the "gunk" hanging on the sides in my eyes offers a surreal texture which counter balances the distinct literal look of the juice. What I wish is that I had some nice sun beams across the juice to provide a few more shades of color and provide another texture within the textures.

Allen not a problem. You mentioned being busy and no one is under any obligation to participate. :)




  
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For exhibition ending 8/14/11

(reprint from social)
Hank I am not as grounded in street as the both of you are. While the subject is interesting to many (I am not a bar fan but that's not the point) the empty blackness of the bar interior took a common scene to my eye and pushed it into the void. I think had I been able to see a little bit of detail in the rest of the bar (at the lowest light levels) it would add a little more story to the story. I'm not making a huge connection with why this person is important to me the viewer. While the reflection is nice the banner behind him adds more weight to that side of the frame while the left gets sparser heading into the void. The light on the subject is excellent and the visible elements of the subject and bar work well together. Interesting use of framing leaving two sides open and two sides closed by the building. Some more observations. No street photograph is without value. And this image captures a moment in time as you saw it. The black of the bar interior does a splendid job in isolating the subject elements.

Allen the angle is interesting and mostly because it serves so well to isolate the different cohesive elements that all come together for an exceptionally balanced frame. Great story line. Stuck in traffic. The display of affection and the family unit on the move. The dangling license plate. The people walking. We see faces and expressions. Worlds within worlds. This is some of the best street in my mind. My favorite this week.

Jason you are consistently one of my favorites. You have such an interesting eye to light. Some of your images may be difficult for others but not for someone who appreciates a unique perspective. As I thought what could be done to improve this image I came up blank. This is an impression of a beautiful natural phenomenon. It was ranked third but could have been second as well. Tough call with this set however I find the originality of intention refreshing.




  
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One thing I want to share that I learned at an outdoor oil painting class. Painters do not use black. They mix opposites to get a shade of black that has color to it. Personally I think if black is used in an image and does not pertain to monochromatic themes a deep color based black may better serve the image.




  
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Aug 18, 2011 13:25 as a reply to  @ jetcode's post |  #13

From the social thread:
"Hank you had my fav of the week. For me I love the two warm globes and the warm piece behind the subject balanced against the cool of the subject and the reflection of the subject in glass. The reflection makes it for me as well as the space around the subject as well as the jester of the piece on the wall in relationship to the subject. Love the way that jester leads the eye to the subject. Also the line formed by hte shadow not only re-enforces that also creates a strong triangular composition with the line formed by the subjects leg to his face up ending at the window frame back down to the bottom of the window frame back to the subjects leg. Smoke'n image Hank... Thats my thoughts."
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Let me comment on the other two also sorry

Ok Joe
The color on this image is really strange (Not in a bad way) but unworldly kinda blueish duotone, the two planes of reality give it a detached feeling and you're not sure what is reality. I really this image also

Jason I liked this but it was just to simplistic visually for me to score higher though I still like it very much. Love the color and the bold sweep and the implied motion.




  
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Aug 18, 2011 20:49 as a reply to  @ airfrogusmc's post |  #14

Allen--Untitled--Excellent job with the hyper-focal setup, and very nice composition and framing. The singular aspect of your capture that intrigues and fascinates me the most is the female subject with her eyes blocked by the rear view mirror...I wish it was more of that. Her pose and apparent line-of-sight gaze give me a sense of voyeuristic drama, of mystery and distance. What is she looking at? What is she thinking? Is her soul in turmoil or at ease? Does she know I'm looking at her? Why am I not allowed to see her eyes? Get it, I can go on.

I do not care about the driver and his petting the lap doggie maneuver, nor the traffic or pedestrians...my attention is solely drawn to the lady with the rear-view eyes. Had she been the sole focus in your composition, framing wise, I would have started bowing down to your greatness and started the Allen fan-club blog.

Otherwise, this is just a good street capture. However, the lady with the rear-view eyes has inspired me.


Hank--Man in the Window--Framing, composition are all excellent. Weighted properly (to my eyes) and leading lines take you to the subject. Darkness, to light, to table to subject. Even the sunlight coming into the window and behind the subject has it's leading edge pointed at the subject.

Good catch on the pose, works well here. What keeps pulling my attention away, and I wish there was more of this, is his reflection in the poster glass behind him...that I dig. On a personal preference note, I feel b&w would have worked better. Just me. Well done.


Joe--Unobtainable Dream--The damage makes this picture special, it is Gothic and ethereal. Beyond the realm of life, this presentation gives a faint view from a deep and dark place. It is old, and nearly forgotten but rife with pain and anguish...

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Aug 18, 2011 23:35 as a reply to  @ Jason C's post |  #15

Allen – At first this shot seems almost too simplistic, just another walk-by shot. Then I start to see the numerous pieces in action inside the car and through the windshield. The guy wearing the I <heart> NY shirt, which leads to the dog, which leads to the woman , her face obscured by the mirror but slightly voyeuristic as I look at her unbuttoned shirt, and then right out the window. But not before I catch the other dog peering out the window, to the next car with the derelict license plate (great touch) and then I am realizing the third car follows a line just as I am kicked forward to the two women. I feel like a pinball. It’s a fun journey and it’s a great capture. Part of me wants to know if all of this was intentional…but I really don’t want to ruin it by hearing it wasn’t.

Jason – First, the title: Corrupted Vinyl. I am one of those people that likes it when a photo and title play off of each other. Whether others might agree or not is irrelevant because right from GO it sets a reference point for me to follow you, the photographer, as you present the image. Second, I would not have guessed that this was not an LP spinning on a turntable so the fact that it is light reflected off another surface, and multiple exposures no less, makes it more appealing. This week simply presented other images that captured my attention in a different way. I still like this photo and it stands on its own merit as an excellent photograph.

Joe – It’s simple, it’s ethereal, and I buy into the entire description – not as a narrative, but more of a fantasy that we can apply to our lives as we see so many things unfulfilled simply sail our of our reach before we have the opportunity to complete them. The bottom line is there are always factors in play that prevent us from attempting to achieve goals, or realizing how quickly they sail away before we understand what was lost. So while this may be an accident in the darkroom or a flaw in the exposure, I like it enough to make it my top pick for the week. It was tough decision because I liked all the images for different reasons. Maybe it’s just that the analogy of things sailing out of my grasp is something I am coming to grips with. On a side note, does anyone else see the face in the wash of chemical bath?

As for my entry, well, it is a shot of a guy in a sidewalk bar. That’s the simple explanation. It was just a quick moment where he caught me looking at him while I had the camera at my hip, and he knew I shot the image afterwards; end of contact, move on. I liked the framing and that’s what caught my eye initially, the rest could be described as a “happy accident.” Some of the things that begin to emerge out the image were not seen at the time the shutter was tripped. For example, the wall art (wtf is that thing anyway?) as it leads the eye to the man while his reflection is finally noticed – I like how it creates a triangular effect within the frame with the sun cutting in. I like the darkness of the interior and I’m glad it isn’t more prominent in the shot – that pushes the guy sitting there more into the front and really doesn’t allow the eye to go too deep. The processing was intended to push the blacks and make the colors standout more, especially the red strip, the blue jeans, and the subdued tones of the bar and chairs (Nik Color Efex – Bleach Bypass filter.) As a side note, I showed him the shot on a return pass a bit later because I like the lcd display so well. Jason -I haven’t converted it to B&W as yet, but I will take a shot at that in Silver Efex Pro. Thanks for the comments guys!


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