C & C is greatly appreciated. What can I do better next time??
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domat Senior Member 485 posts Likes: 14 Joined Jun 2010 Location: New York More info | Jul 25, 2011 14:00 | #1 C & C is greatly appreciated. What can I do better next time??
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kraaazymike Goldmember 1,231 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jun 2006 More info | Jul 25, 2011 14:53 | #2 The best thing you can do for this photo: loose the towel. The pose and lighting are okay. Though trying a diffuser or a larger one for next time will help improve the harsh shadows. Also, a touch larger on the crop to make room on the bottom would help.
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JimCapaldi Goldmember 1,157 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2006 Location: Springfield, PA USA More info | I like this shot except for the cropping, which should be done lower so you would have less of the top sky and more of the bottom of the beach. You almost cut off her feet. The background with the waves coming in is great. Canon EOS 6D / EF 50 mm 1.4 / EF 24-105mm f/4L IS / EF 70-300 mm 4-5.6 IS / EF 100mm f/2.8L IS
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Duff Senior Member 381 posts Likes: 1 Joined Sep 2008 Location: Carrollton, VA More info | I second the towel comment... sexy women love to get dirty... or we just love it when our women are dirty. Duff - Gary McDuffie Jr
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kuraz Senior Member 624 posts Joined Aug 2009 Location: Louisiana More info | Jul 25, 2011 21:40 | #5 I third the towel comment......and a larger light would be best. if you dont have one then try a lil bit earlier in the day and slightly over expose the background just a hair.
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Jul 25, 2011 21:52 | #6 Thanks for the comments guys. I did crop to close to her feet in an effort to hide the unsightly towel. But I went back and agree that a longer crop would be better.
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