Approve the Cookies
This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and our Privacy Policy.		 OK
Forums  •   • New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear
Guest
Forums  •   • New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear
Register to forums    Log in

 
FORUMS ➔ Photo Sharing & Discussion ➔ People 
Thread started 27 Jul 2011 (Wednesday) 12:20
Search threadPrev/next
sponsored links (only for non-logged)

My beautiful girlfriend

17 posts, 2 pages
1 2 Next
 
Hard ­ Drive ­ Disk
Senior Member
Avatar
485 posts
Joined Jul 2011
More info
     
Jul 27, 2011 12:20 |  #1

From our banquet at our school.



HOSTED PHOTO
please log in to view hosted photos in full size.

Gear List
I Love ThinkTank
Is It Normal for Me to Have 7 Camera Bags?

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
missjayne
Hatchling
Avatar
8 posts
Joined Jul 2011
Location: Dover, DE
More info
     
Jul 27, 2011 12:22 |  #2

wow, nice shot! absolutely gorgeous! as is your gf :)

Facebook (external link) - brand new
Blog (external link) - my life in photographs
Twitter (external link) - random random and more random

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
windpig
Chopped liver
Avatar
15,933 posts
Gallery: 7 photos
Likes: 2277
Joined Dec 2008
Location: Just South of Ballard
More info
     
Jul 27, 2011 12:37 |  #3

Really nice.
I'd probably consider a different crop.

Would you like to buy a vowel?
Go ahead, spin the wheel.
flickr (external link)
I'm accross the canal just south of Ballard, the town Seattle usurped in 1907.

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
thecackster
Senior Member
Avatar
915 posts
Gallery: 1 photo
Likes: 96
Joined Aug 2007
Location: Seattle, WA
More info
     
Jul 27, 2011 13:09 |  #4

Great lighting and she is gorgeous. +1 for a tighter crop. ditch the top part of the image it is distracting.




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
HayleyFugatt
Junior Member
Avatar
22 posts
Gallery: 1 photo
Likes: 51
Joined Jun 2007
Location: Conway, Arkansas, USA
More info
     
Jul 27, 2011 15:19 |  #5

I like the processing, but I too agree with a tighter crop.
I'd consider some post on the dark circles, too. Not meant in a rude way, of course :)

http://facebook.com/ha​yley.fugatt.photograph​y (external link)http://www.hayleyfugat​t.com/ (external link)
http://www.instagram.c​om/hayleyfugatt/ (external link)

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
loveworks
Member
48 posts
Joined Jan 2007
More info
     
Jul 27, 2011 17:34 |  #6

Great light, but I agree with the others about the crop. It makes her look very diminuative...




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
kuraz
Senior Member
624 posts
Joined Aug 2009
Location: Louisiana
More info
     
Jul 27, 2011 18:23 |  #7

I like it but it seems to lack a little vibrance IMO. Just a smudge tho

Gear

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
keithzheng
Member
Avatar
141 posts
Joined Dec 2005
Location: Ningbo China
More info
     
Jul 27, 2011 20:38 |  #8

ditch the top part of the image it is distracting




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
Hard ­ Drive ­ Disk
THREAD ­ STARTER
Senior Member
Avatar
485 posts
Joined Jul 2011
More info
     
Jul 27, 2011 20:43 |  #9

Is this better?



HOSTED PHOTO
please log in to view hosted photos in full size.

Gear List
I Love ThinkTank
Is It Normal for Me to Have 7 Camera Bags?

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
x_tan
Cream of the Crop
Avatar
8,153 posts
Gallery: 137 photos
Best ofs: 3
Likes: 511
Joined Sep 2010
Location: ɐılɐɹʇsnɐ 'ǝuɹnoqlǝɯ
More info
     
Jul 27, 2011 20:51 |  #10

She is beautiful!

Should try with a telephoto lens, and look direct into the lens again.

Canon 5D3 + Zoom (EF 17-40L, 24-105L & 28-300L, 100-400L II) & Prime (24L II, 85L II, 100L, 135L & 200 f/2.8L II; Zeiss 1,4/35)
Sony α7r + Zeiss 1,8/55 FE
Nikon Coolpix A; Nikon F3 & F100 + Zeiss 1,4/50
Retiring (external link)

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
bowyia
Hatchling
1 post
Joined Nov 2010
More info
     
Jul 27, 2011 20:51 |  #11

This looks better, great photography.




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
c2thew
Goldmember
Avatar
3,929 posts
Likes: 4
Joined Aug 2008
Location: Not enough minerals.
More info
     
Jul 27, 2011 21:05 |  #12

I like the lighting but you might want to soften the bags around her eyes as that's where my eyes tend to shift to.

Flickr (external link) |Gear|The-Digital-Picture (external link)|The $6 mic | MAGIC LANTERN (external link) | Welding Filter
Go Support Magic Lantern 2.3!!

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
windpig
Chopped liver
Avatar
15,933 posts
Gallery: 7 photos
Likes: 2277
Joined Dec 2008
Location: Just South of Ballard
More info
     
Jul 27, 2011 21:53 |  #13

Nice job on the redo.

Would you like to buy a vowel?
Go ahead, spin the wheel.
flickr (external link)
I'm accross the canal just south of Ballard, the town Seattle usurped in 1907.

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
kuraz
Senior Member
624 posts
Joined Aug 2009
Location: Louisiana
More info
     
Jul 27, 2011 22:02 |  #14

I like the crop and the vibrancy in the redo. The other looked a lil dull. You could mask out the green from the trees and grass and just make her a little more vibrant but that's just me being picky. Still looks good

Gear

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
Hard ­ Drive ­ Disk
THREAD ­ STARTER
Senior Member
Avatar
485 posts
Joined Jul 2011
More info
     
Jul 27, 2011 23:02 |  #15

kuraz wrote in post #12835051 (external link)
I like the crop and the vibrancy in the redo. The other looked a lil dull. You could mask out the green from the trees and grass and just make her a little more vibrant but that's just me being picky. Still looks good


HOSTED PHOTO
please log in to view hosted photos in full size.

Gear List
I Love ThinkTank
Is It Normal for Me to Have 7 Camera Bags?

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
sponsored links (only for non-logged)

17 posts, 2 pages
1 2 Next
3,904 views & 0 likes for this thread, 13 members have posted to it.
My beautiful girlfriend
FORUMS ➔ Photo Sharing & Discussion ➔ People 
AAA
x 1600
y 1600

Jump to forum...   •  Rules   •  Forums   •  New posts   •  RTAT   •  'Best of'   •  Gallery   •  Gear   •  Reviews   •  Member list   •  Polls   •  Image rules   •  Search   •  Password reset   •  Home
Not a member yet?
Register to forums
Registered members may log in to forums and access all the features: full search, image upload, follow forums, own gear list and ratings, likes, more forums, private messaging, thread follow, notifications, own gallery, all settings, view hosted photos, own reviews, see more and do more... and all is free. Don't be a stranger - register now and start posting!


COOKIES DISCLAIMER: This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and to our privacy policy.
Privacy policy and cookie usage info.

POWERED BY AMASS forum software 2.58forum software
version 2.58 /
code and design
by Pekka Saarinen ©
for photography-on-the.net

Latest registered member was a spammer, and banned as such!
2604 guests, 170 members online
Simultaneous users record so far is 15,144, that happened on Nov 22, 2018

Photography-on-the.net Digital Photography Forums is the website for photographers and all who love great photos, camera and post processing techniques, gear talk, discussion and sharing. Professionals, hobbyists, newbies and those who don't even own a camera -- all are welcome regardless of skill, favourite brand, gear, gender or age. Registering and usage is free.