Jasmina in central park

Still learning so I appreciate all criticism. Feel free to be harsh I can take it.

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I really enjoy these.
They're all very crip, clear, and nicely (and naturally) edited.
Great work! <3

The only things I can see are:

- Picture 1: Her lipstick...it seems extremely messy? I'm not sure if that was your doing or hers...its' just a little distracting to me.

-Picture 3: I really like this one a lot. The person in the background is simply unfortunate. That aside, I love the shallow DoF.

-Picture 4: It is really the only one out of the set that I'm not really fond of. Then angle just isn't flattering to her face in my opinion. She looks kind of crazy. :P

Altogether, you got great shots of a beautiful woman! Keep up the good work!

Very nice photo's;

#2 has a nasty beam of light that cuts across her.
#7 the reflection in the sun glasses of her legs is distracting to me

Hayley, Thanks for your comments. I thought she looked sweet in that picture. Then again she is your age you probably can pick out a crazy 18 year old better then I can now

Rocky- yeah that beam bugs me but the rest of the shot looked so nice I still included it. Looking at it again you are right about the reflection I will try and clone it out.

1 to 5 could POP more. They're a bit flat. Particularly 1 and 2 which also look under exposed.

Markd102 wrote in post #12834170
1 to 5 could POP more. They're a bit flat. Particularly 1 and 2 which also look under exposed.

I tried to make the first 2 pop more. let me know if they are an improvement.