The Beauty of the Japanese

Recent shoot with this lovely woman. I would as usual love criticism. Feel free to be harsh and let me know what I can do better next time.

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It may just be me, but I'm not really a fan of red x's.

After going through the links, the first three are pretty good. Nice poses and compositions. It looks like they could use some WB adjustments, as they seem on the warm (orange) side. Some fill might have also helped in a couple.

#4 doesn't work, maybe because it was blown in a few spots (right arm and shirt)?

How about now?

^ They show up now.

She's one of the most beautiful girls I've ever seen, stunning.

I think the shots need some WB adjustment (as mentioned) but I like the composition in #2 and #4. What is the light spot by her right eye?

Bheims wrote in post #12859260
She's one of the most beautiful girls I've ever seen, stunning.

I think the shots need some WB adjustment (as mentioned) but I like the composition in #2 and #4. What is the light spot by her right eye?

makeup. SHe actually has it on both eyes but a little darker on that one. My meager PP skills were not to the task of fixing it.

Moreronn- Thanks for taking the effort to go to the links. Yes 4 is blown out on the hands. probably shouldn't have included it here. will work on the white balance.