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Aug 11, 2011 05:58 |  #1

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Aug 11, 2011 06:31 |  #2

Either she was moving or you didn't do something right with your shutter speed, she doesn't seem very sharp. Secondly, I like how she isn't centered for the composition, although I feel like if she was a little towards the left, it would have been better, you'd see the staircases on the right to lead attention into the subject and you wouldnt have trees growing on top of her head. ;D




  
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Aug 11, 2011 07:06 as a reply to  @ Jordan_Inc's post |  #3

I hate the title!


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Aug 11, 2011 11:40 |  #4

I have to agree with the centering because the background is uninteresting. If there was a better background this composition would work better.


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Aug 11, 2011 20:07 as a reply to  @ Bleufire's post |  #5

I agree on the necessity of a better title! Also watch the landscape tilting - I only notice that because it's one of the things I've been working on watching in my own work.




  
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Aug 14, 2011 09:30 |  #6

Whats wrong with the title~~ haha thanks for the tips guys.


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Aug 14, 2011 09:37 |  #7

rsieminski wrote in post #12915184 (external link)
I hate the title!

Really helpful :rolleyes:


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