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Streetlight Member 81 posts Joined Jan 2010 More info | Aug 11, 2011 05:58 | #1
comments and critiques welcome. See my 500px!
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Jordan_Inc Member  147 posts Joined Mar 2011 More info | Aug 11, 2011 06:31 | #2 Either she was moving or you didn't do something right with your shutter speed, she doesn't seem very sharp. Secondly, I like how she isn't centered for the composition, although I feel like if she was a little towards the left, it would have been better, you'd see the staircases on the right to lead attention into the subject and you wouldnt have trees growing on top of her head. ;D
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rsieminski Senior Member  733 posts Likes: 5 Joined Jul 2008 Location: Sunny Florida More info | I hate the title! --Rick
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Bleufire Goldmember  1,203 posts Likes: 53 Joined Mar 2008 Location: California More info | Aug 11, 2011 11:40 | #4 I have to agree with the centering because the background is uninteresting. If there was a better background this composition would work better. 5D*Sigma 50/1.4*EF 17-40/4
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talloulou Senior Member 358 posts Joined Feb 2010 Location: Puget Sound More info | I agree on the necessity of a better title! Also watch the landscape tilting - I only notice that because it's one of the things I've been working on watching in my own work.
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Aug 14, 2011 09:30 | #6 Whats wrong with the title~~ haha thanks for the tips guys. See my 500px!
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Aug 14, 2011 09:37 | #7 rsieminski wrote in post #12915184  I hate the title! Really helpful See my 500px!
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