Young newbie seeking critique.c:

Hello hello.
Just grduated from highschool,there i took the photography class for 3 years.
But thats all there is to it,So im still kinda fuzzed about it.
Recently got my first LSR,canon 600d.
Completely inlove with it.
Kinda shocking at first using it though.
Therefore i would love to hear some critique from pros.

Some recent photos.oldest to newest.

IMAGE LINK: http://www.flickr.com …/66329913@N05/6​039066603/

IMAGE LINK: http://www.flickr.com …/66329913@N05/6​039064917/

IMAGE LINK: http://www.flickr.com …/66329913@N05/6​039071729/

IMAGE LINK: http://www.flickr.com …/66329913@N05/6​039071717/

They're a bit arty.

David

What do you mean?

Honestly, they look more like snapshots.

They are not.
Do you mind explaining what gives off that impression?

Sort of slices of life. Not snapshots because there seems to be more than merely recording a scene.

The composition seems strange in all of them, it looks like you just held down the continuous shooting option and fired away hoping to get a few good shots. Thnats just my opinion. Dont take offense or anything but im critiquing you! No hard feeling, we all start somewhere

I can't see the images.

Ive been told countless of times my photos composition is strange haha.
Of course! No hard feelings at all.
I understand what youre saying,sadly,its not the case,i did take every picture with full attention.
But thank you for sharing your opinion!

Organic - I`ll reupload them.
I took the urls from my facebook,maybe thats it. o:

Reuploaded from flickr.
Does it work properly now?:o

1st pic. I like this one, the strongest of the 4 in mu opinion
2nd pic. What are you shooting? no real subject. doesn't flow at all. my eye is not drawn to any part of the shot.
3rd pic.What is the subject. the baby or the "mum and the baby" if you had got in a little closer and got the baby's head and the hand in the shot, Or moved out further and got mums head/ face in shot probably in portrait format in would have been stronger. I think if you spent a few minutes and cropped this shot it would be much improved
4th pic. Again a tighter crop may work, or may if the girl was looking at the camera.

Keep trying, you will get better. Spend some time looking around the site here at other people pics. There is so much good advice around here.. You will get a handle on who makes useful criticism and who is making inane comments to get their post count up.

Soda-Pop wrote in post #12929568
Honestly, they look more like snapshots.

No - this guy has taken photography classes for three years!

David

SamSkyline wrote in post #12929564
What do you mean?

If you mean me, I was being kind of complementary.

David

08photog wrote in post #12929735
1st pic. I like this one, the strongest of the 4 in mu opinion
2nd pic. What are you shooting? no real subject. doesn't flow at all. my eye is not drawn to any part of the shot.
3rd pic.What is the subject. the baby or the "mum and the baby" if you had got in a little closer and got the baby's head and the hand in the shot, Or moved out further and got mums head/ face in shot probably in portrait format in would have been stronger. I think if you spent a few minutes and cropped this shot it would be much improved
4th pic. Again a tighter crop may work, or may if the girl was looking at the camera.

Keep trying, you will get better. Spend some time looking around the site here at other people pics. There is so much good advice around here.. You will get a handle on who makes useful criticism and who is making inane comments to get their post count up.

Thank you!
That sure was helpful c:


And side note - Im a female.

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