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C&C for a couple of a teen's shots.

 
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Aug 15, 2011 14:24 |  #1

Hi everyone,

I am looking for some tips and advice from photographers that are much more experienced than my young self.

The first picture is a bridge, as I was starting to get more into it. Light editing, not much done to it.

The second photo is of a tractor at my uncle's farm. It is completely unedited, that is the way it came out of the camera :D

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Thanks in advance,

Ryan


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Aug 15, 2011 14:40 |  #2

the second one is nice maybe a little under exposed it would be nice if it poped just a little be more. very good photo and composition though.

the first one the perception is off (bridge pulls to the right) the telephone poll is distracting other than that for me its just not that interesting maybe if there was something at the end of the bridge


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Aug 15, 2011 14:52 |  #3

focus and longer focal length and the telephone pole


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Aug 15, 2011 15:02 |  #4

You've made a decent start.

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